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Life Is A Journey
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written for the "Land of the Muse" challenge. To use the phrase: " Life is a journey"




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Life is a Journey





This journey begin in the mountains,
On the worn paths of my ancestors,
They sought to protect us in the hidden valleys,
To raise us in the old ways,
Untouched my modern man…

This journey begin on trails century old,
Carried on the backs of our mothers,
Wrapped in somber blankets,
Hidden from the hatred and fear,
Of those who condemned our beliefs.

The old ones were weary,
Yet they found the strength to teach us,
“Life is a journey”, they said,
And you must walk in harmony with the earth,
“Listen to your heart” they told us,
“Follow the ways of our people,
You must learn to listen to everything.

The breeze will tell you many things,
And the trees have secrets,
The stone too has its story,
If you stop to listen…”

We did not hear them.
We ran to the city below,
Thinking they were old and stale,
And we wanted the new world!

The world broke us,
And we lost our way.
We came home one by one,
The mountain called to us.

We missed her strong shoulders,
And gentle beauty,
We missed the clean rivers,
And sweet waters,
We missed our grandfather’s wisdom,
And gentle teachings…

We missed our mother,
And her loving acceptance of our rebellion;
We came home expecting retribution,
But when we went to our grandfathers,

They took the pipe and tobacco,
And sent a message to the spirit world,
Giving thanks and blessings to clear our way…
I asked him how he could forgive us,
For running away and forgetting,
Where we came from…

And he said;
“My sweet child,
Life is a journey,
And every child must find their way,
The path is hard and crooked,
But always returns to its source,
And you have not returned here with empty hands,
You have brought back hope.”

I laid my head on his knee,
And he blessed me,
Wiping away my tears,
I spend my days listening now,
To everything;

This journey ends in the mountains,
I have found my way again.
I am home.









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 Reviews of "Life Is A Journey"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
Life indeed is a journey. We determine the journey and the rewards.
Beautifully said...

Elizabeth

Reviewed on April 6, 2006
WHEN ONE SYNCHRONIZES WONDERS ONE FINDS THE TOOLS TO COMPLETE THE
TASKS OF LIFE AND DRINK THE NECTAR OF BLISS.

Blessed is the daughter of Mother Poet that wants to come back home, for HOME is the name of Her Poem.

"Life Is A Journey" glows and flows through this reader's heart.

I did enjoy the sublimity of this composition... "Life Is A Journey" made the wings of my imagination fly.


I salute You, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 6, 2006
Well, Retta this is truly beautiful and touches one's heart for sure. Wonderful write. Hugs, Trish

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
A fantastic write Retta
I could not stop reading till the end
and craved for more

William
Love & Peace

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
wisdom and creative dexterity merged into a wonderful poem ...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2006
Dear Reindeer,

Your beautiful Native American Spirit has so much to teach us. Thank You for sharing the Wisdom of the Elders. I sense that it is a good path to follow.

Blessings of Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on April 2, 2006
this life is our journey and you have told us yours(so far),but how much further do we go...to the end.
very good write!!!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on March 31, 2006
This is beautiful and so very thoughtfully written. So close to life, and universal at the same time...

D

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on March 31, 2006
The value of treasured cultural legacies are easily lost in the modern world. Your extraordinary craftsmanship illustrates beautifully how much we stand to lose by turning our backs on time-honored wisdom and how much there is to gain from the Love and knowledge and strength of those who made the JOURNEY before us.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 31, 2006
Peaceful completion is expressed and I can use the therapeutic aura of your verses here, my friend (respectfully). Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2006
A very descriptive write of how you found your way back home!
Very well written!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 29, 2006
All Life (Lives) Is Journey,i.e. It's Narrow Path (God) Placed You On Strays (Off)Away Makes It Not Anything But Your Own Heaven Went To Your Own Holy Hell...

Why Do Some People Follow It Has Millions Do Not Simply Look At Todays (Path) World Of Holy Hell...

TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2006
Hi Retta..
You can really touch the soul..
Thanks for your encouragement...

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
what a wonderful completion of the exercise and, as always, your expression is so well done, the images so clear, the poetry so storylike, that the feeling one gets from it kind of echoes in my mind even after finishing the read...great work!

Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Reindeer~

A masterful write from you; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Retta,

A masterwork you have penned, beautifully imaged and written; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
This is beautiful and touches me deeply because of events I have been though in the past few years that has brought me home :-)

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Outstanding Retta! I loved this.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
This is a masterwork from the heart. A journey from the arms of your Mother out into the "world" and back again to your Source. Oh this is saved to be read again and again. Thank you for sharing your truth, Retta...

Lin

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
This is so beautiful Retta!!

Well done sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Retta
Thanks again for sharing and exchanging your inner wisdom and light
in this enlightening and memorable pen !
I am keeping this in my archives ...:)
Fabolous picture too
Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Never, ever forget where you came from, iinstead use that ancient knowledge to maneuver through the new and exciting new world. I liked this poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Reindeer, this is outstanding beauty with a great wisdom message! No matter what our roots we must live what we are, and when we do we will find peace. Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
So wise and so great a message here for both children and parents. If we could all look at life in this way what a wonderful world could be created for tomorrow.

Felix


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