The Knight Who Stands Before Us... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 9, 2011

This medeval Brave knight, with his sword and his might, I wish for his protecting presense, for you, all through the night} Les Bond

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

such beautiful words...

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

..the time has come for darkness to leave...The Knight has come...it is done!!!

Excellent write..just perfect!!!

{{hugs}}

vesna

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Such beautiful sentiments and it's really sad that some people have to be hurtful, but such is life I guess. This is still a great family of poets who geniuinely support one another.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Yes he is a gentle and beautiful soul. this is beautiful, if you want to know ask me, I'm not confused.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Reindeer,

No one can doubt the pureness of your heart and you have delivered your message with eloquence.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Powerful write Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Yes...this is gem of a write...clap clap clap...one of ure best.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

So graceful, so beautifully done...a very lovely poem Retta

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Bravo! You have much class.....
Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Retta, Love the message here and I absolutely LOVE the picture! Who drew it, do you know? ~Kerry

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Magnificent message I applaud you and the brave Knight may we all stand tall

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Bravo Reindeer! This is a real beauty, showing your class, you heart, and expertise!

Reviewed by Heather White (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

this was wonderful, i am speechless

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Retta,
This is beautiful and from your
heart also took much courage
but that is what friends are for
and if not friends then what is life worth
living I know this one will touch the Knight and his Lady It is sad....
Take care
LM

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Nice touch.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

{{{{{{{{{{{REINDEER}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
I am In speechless hold to the power I felt in this one. And to the total beauty of Your soul..... Love ya sweetie and the Nameless Knight shall treasure this one I am sure that
you write of as His lady Cherishes him and his bravery and Her friend in court a beautifl Reindeer truer to heart and fairer than spring in its blooming full glory.....
OOh sweet friend Love Ya
This was priceless it shall go into my keepers of beauties to have always...
{{tears}}}}}
Pricless slivers of Mi Ladies heart and soul in this...
Love Lady Peg

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

This is a wonderful write ... Bravo ... I'm proud of you dear. I loved this write a lot. Thanks for this wonderful write. I'm so happy you did it and i am so happy to tell you i am for you. Your words make it clear what you wish from AD and what you like AD to be like. I'm So proud of you. Thanks for this wonderful support to that knight who fight for the lady in his heart. I'm indeed proud of that man who strongly be with her. Bcoz i like that Lady somuch ...She is indeed a beautiful angel of romance and i like her bcoz she filling in romance in my heart for you. Her writes are really romantic refreshments. I like to stand with u ... and so with those lovely hearts. Wish this AD be safe from that rotten hands. But i want to tell u something : There are men and also women who support such people. Sometimes such supports are spoiling this DEN and not the man. Those who support the indecencies must understand by supporting a wrong person ..They are leting him do more wrong and finally they are responsible for the FALL of AD. Wish those who support the wrong stop supporting him and try to change him leting him understand what is good and what is bad. Hope he will do fine and help AD and the poets here to live a happy life. Spoiling one prestige is easy but to build it back is really tough and sometimes can't. Wish all in AD ... whoever he or she is ... Whoever he or she supporting the wrong ... First understand that they are wrong... Hope all be brave like you to come forwrad to support the good. Wish all do good ... Thanks for this wonderful write ...
Keep your tough for any response ... I stand for you ...

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

Awesome , powerful and true!!!!
Excellance beyond further description my dear Lady Retta!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

A great write..powerful..Floreann

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

While Words Are Liken To Swords, But Ignorance Is Liken To (Arrogance) Death,i.e. When Ya Leave Do Not Look Back_

When Somebody Asks Me Whacha Gona Do To Me_

I Say It Is Not What I am Gona Do To You,It Is Whacha Gona Do To Yourself...

TRASK

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

i hope you aren't leaving the den; we need you here! what a sad and mournful write; well done! i, too, am staying here; nearly left, but am needed here. i have so many friends here, so i can't just leave like that. thank you for standing by me. i shall do the same for you! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

(((reindeer)))

"...so fight on brave knight,
win this battle for right *write?*,
i can no longer hide,
i am standing by your side..."

me, too, reindeer, me, too

AWESOME write *clapping hands*

you've said much truth in this--well done

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 16, 2003

I wanted everyone to stay too, but if anyone wants to leave then it's their choice. They must think this is a bad place so they leave.

There is no such place as bad place, only people who's made it bad.

I'm staying, even if it is bad, I'm still staying.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)