There doesn’t even seem to be a slight glimmer of hope
I can’t understand why I couldn’t cope
I should escape while I can
but I can’t – I don’t even have a plan
I’m well and truly lost
Couldn’t you just come back to help me across?
Couldn’t you give me the answer
to make everything so much better?
Please tell me if you have left me for another
either way its not going to make things any less harder
I promise that I’ll cry endless tears for you
I promise that I can never get over you
But please tell me something about you and I
I don’t know anything, might as well have a blind eye
Tell me anything so I’ll be satisfied
Least I know its not wasted tears that I’ve cried
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Reviews of "You and I"
Reviewed by Courtnie
Reviewed on February 8, 2003
i really like this, especially since i can also relate it to me...and some ppl are so oblivious *achem*^^^^
*~*Courtnie*~*
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2003
Sara, some guys are wonderful until they feel they haave completed their conquest, then it is off to the races again for them,
and they don't worry who they leave behind. Bill Murray
again, outstanding...i loved this line:One minute you love me, the next you don’t
You promise you will but really, you won’t
I understand wut you mean there and i hope everything turns out ok..dont blame yourself he's the one who's blind, for he still hasn't seemed to see what a great catch you are! Who else can write like this! LoL!
The worst part is not knowing. Once we know what the problem is, we feel that we have a chance in solving it. One guaranteed chance is prayer. It's a powerful thing. I have been right where this poem takes me so many times. It sucks bad. Beautifully done and heartfelt. Love, Beth
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
*~*Courtnie*~*
and they don't worry who they leave behind. Bill Murray
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Nancy
again, outstanding...i loved this line:One minute you love me, the next you don’t
You promise you will but really, you won’t
I understand wut you mean there and i hope everything turns out ok..dont blame yourself he's the one who's blind, for he still hasn't seemed to see what a great catch you are! Who else can write like this! LoL!