impressed by the man
who holds the door for
the woman stranger
hands full of course
yet still today it's honor
impressed by the woman
who stops to help a
stray cat in despair
can't always give
it a home I'm sure
still I admire that so
by the faithful husband
to the wife so cruel
and wonder why
he still stays
loyalty I'd assume
yet the harsh truth
may never be revealed
impressed by this
society even with
every one's heavy reasons
and most of the time lost
and so different from
all that I'd like to see
but the little things I note
make impressions
on my heart
Angel,
What can I say that everyone has not! You write with Clarity!!!
This is a very true, and moving piece. We leave impressions where ever we go, especially on the heart!
Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Angel there is much profound truth with a valid ring to this write! It is always amazing to me that these little things of which you speak are often by most taken for granted!
Excellant Piece!
~Nikki~
Wonderful, insightful write...especially love the ending--"the little things I note
make impressions
on my heart"
Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Wonderful poetry.
meaningful
LMM
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Angel,
so much truth and flow to this and I often too wonder of these issues in your write. 'make impressions on the heart."
these are the things that we see. and we remember.
Excellent piece.
Peggy
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
Note: Since my husband's cancer surgery 4/25/05, this book content has been integrated into the public speaking content for audiences interested in a sassy approach to personal and/or community awareness events. Another chapbook on intimate love poet
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many do not ...... that's what makes you wonderful .
What can I say that everyone has not! You write with Clarity!!!
This is a very true, and moving piece. We leave impressions where ever we go, especially on the heart!
Hugs,
Maria
Excellant Piece!
~Nikki~
make impressions
on my heart"
meaningful
LMM
so much truth and flow to this and I often too wonder of these issues in your write. 'make impressions on the heart."
these are the things that we see. and we remember.
Excellent piece.
Peggy