Sitting here looking at you from across the room, I feel my heart begin to quicken. I feel like the teenage girl I use to be, but know that its the womanly feelings awaking inside of me.
I feel the excitment building and my body trembling for your touch. Yearning for your embrace. Passion, oh yes passion indeed, causing me to quiver all over.
As our eyes meet, I see your love shinning from deep inside. We are friends and lovers of the deepest kind.
You take me in your arms to dance,my body trembles and I go weak with passion, wanting to devour you there on the floor. Not caring who see's us as we neck and slowly waltz out the door.
You are my man, my lover, my friend.
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Reviewed by Linda Dobbin
7/3/2007
Lina, you did it again.. I always know you were a romatic girl at heart.
Love ya
sister-in -law
Linda
Reviewed by Dianne Burton
6/28/2007
to speak such passion on your true soulmate is wonderful and all should have such a person in their lives :) your huband is a rare breed and I wish you both much Luck ,Love and Laughter
Reviewed by Marion Burton
3/22/2007
Hi Lina,We are all so lucky to have found wonderful men to share our lives with.I personally feel that we were all blessed in more ways then one.Thanks Sis,love Marion xxxooo
Reviewed by neerja gandhi
3/22/2007
being in love is something beyond describable....if love happens,it makes life worth-while and we look forward to every little endeavour..nice write...................n
Oh Lina,I know where this is going and coming from. We are so lucky in love with the right companions. Together forever in love.
Thank you Sis, love Rose XOXO
Oh Selena this is special, it's basic sensuality overshadowed with love that is long and deep and so passionate that it reeks of the promise of what love is meant to be. I guess all the Dobbins must be blessed with a lusty romantic side. Hugs,
your cuz
Fee