Terrified,
she pushed open the door
of the dilapidated cabin,
squeezed into stale darkness,
away from
the something on the trail—
a rustle sound
simultaneous
with the swishing of her clothes.
No.
Not simultaneous—
there were always
those few milliseconds of echoes
intruding into her breathless pauses!
She knew the stories.
Push them back.
Don’t think about—
Safe here—
just close the door.
Someone will come.
When?
Troy would never quit fishing
with daylight remaining.
Would he
come back this way?
Or would he slip
farther down the river,
bypass this trail?
Those stories—
no!
Yes.
News stories of people—
always little people.
Kids,
small women,
attacked
in a deserted area just as—
Why had she
decided to find Troy?
It was a silly whim,
a stupid, stupid mistake.
Her news could have waited—
for weeks—
or months!
Now—
She surveyed cluttered forms
shaping in dim light:
lumpy
old
spotty
camelhair coats
on a sagging cot
in a corner,
a pair of missing boards
at the back
allowed filtered twilight
to bathe
her grasping eyes.
Goose bumps rose—
she had smelled
something
like this before.
A zoo?
No!
She would not
think about that.
Should she go back outside,
take her chances
on the darkening trail?
She knew now—
she couldn’t stay here.
A weapon—
she had to find something—
A squirmy sound!
Camelhair moved,
mewled
at a new presence.
Cubs fawned,
epiphany dawned,
she mouthed
a voiceless scream.
A large
tawny shadow
blocked twilight—
and
garnered
fiery
yellow
reflections
of
her
little
lost
soul.
vesna
THIS is outstanding..I LOVED the suspense! I want more now....ha ha! This may make a plot for a good book!
Thank you,
Teresa
Chrissie
this one is intense and leaves the heart pounding--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
tawny shadow
blocked twilight—
and
garnered
fiery
yellow
reflections
of
her
little
lost
soul(heart)
Fine write Leland!!
Love
Tinka
a fantastic write!
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)