Taliban Plan (poem) by Leland Waldrip on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

the world is too caught up in it religious, cultural and political dogmas...

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

That's an interesting poem on a very delicate subject.
Enjoyed reading it.
Love
S.
PS: Thanks for the hint. I know I sometimes have difficulties with spelling-but I am more used to French than English so pls excuse. Always welcome to correct me

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

very well crafted poem on a difficult subject

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

Excellent write!
Hugs
Lady G

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

I see the witch has visited you with her propaganda.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

Interesting and unique...write on!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Leland,

I just wrote this poem as an answer to yours here; pls read:

Half the world is white
The other half is red
Half call themselves �might�
The rest worship God
How can the left be �right�
Or the right misled
In the East, the sun�s light
In the West, it�s dead.

Half the world is White
The other half is red
Half will forever fight
To steal the other�s bread
Cocksure they are bright
To live without a head
Adamant their night
Must be the day instead!

Did you get me?

Nevine Al seidi

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Leland!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All of this based on MISCONCEPTION!
Taliban is NOT an invention; it is a STANDARD
Islamic Government.. And No, it is not about what you are saying!
Nevine

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

An excellent assessment in flawless meter and rhyme, no less! Leland you are a magician;-)

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Hi Leland,
You hit the nail right
on the head....

Great one...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Very Interesting, and thought provoking, excellent expression,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

I know.. I know.. this is without a doubt an amazing, thought provoking subject and a gripping delivery.. BUT.. I am breathtaken by the absolutely perfect rhythm and rhyme you've written this with as well.. remove one letter and it would be noticed.. god, this is good! katy.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Very interesting poem, I'm glad you posted it! ~Z~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

(((leland)))

unique, creative write, my friend...

no, i don't think this would have flown very well LOL

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

You have it right on the money and said in a clear way that even I can understand it. Good work.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Interesting and unique.