This is a poem I wrote to my wife "Mama", she took it to work and hung it up by her desk. A lady saw it and asked that I make up a shadowbox to give to her daughter at her wedding. She asked that I use Mama's poem in it.
Forever
When I look into your eyes
It is forever that I see
Forever is the only way
I can see you and me
We have a certain kind of love
Enjoyed by very few
I will journey through my life
Forevermore in love with you
First line, should it read "when [I] look..."
or should it read "when [looking]..."
Something seems to be missing...perhaps a typo when you posted. I have this keyboard that gives me extra letters or drops letters, and so I am always retyping.
A very lovely write and your wife must be very proud to have someone want the same thing in a shadow box, how wonderful for you both;-)!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2003
Jack I commented before on this poem and when I clicked to register it the page went dowm. The poem made me cry. Your Mother is so lucky to have a Son like you. I wish my Mother were alive. God bless you Jack
Bill
Be blessed,
Betty
Reindeer
This is beautiful....
Trixie :)
Chrissie
Excellent
Jacqueline
Bobbi
Excellent
William
Heidi
or should it read "when [looking]..."
Something seems to be missing...perhaps a typo when you posted. I have this keyboard that gives me extra letters or drops letters, and so I am always retyping.
This is a sweet little poem.
Bill