Whatever ends up happening to me I might as well look fate square in the face No matter where the pieces come to rest
The puzzle will be finished finally The way it will and that way will be best Because that way is the way it will be However the pieces fall into place
That configuration of destiny Can only be accepted then with grace Since there will be nothing else I can do But inhabit my place in time and space
I only hope that I will be with you And that together someday we might see The pieces of us both fit in embrace
You want it * You pray hard enough and It will be! I love how your tale of hope inspires the living even more Steve, you have that knack you see! You have that quality about you! * Give us some more! Love and BRIGHT Light! Warmly, *She OXO
I am not always sure if there is something that we can do about our fate or not, Steven. I often feel I have taken fate into my own hands and been able to do something about it; other times I am sure we are like twigs on the stormy sea. Beautiful write.
Wonderful poem Steve!!
And your dream will come true; maybe in a different form ... for it seems we are creators of our reality and destiny ... always evolving...
Love, Suzie :-D
A sweet tale told in poetry that makes one yearn that it will so.
Reviewed by Ronnee Workman (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
Somber, provocative, haunting, and awesomely chilling. The plea
for connection at the end of one's destiny with a yet missing
someone or essence; is indeed stunningly surreal! The last three
lines evoke both a an epitaph and eulogy; utterly mezmerizing.
Brilliant presentation here again Stevie. Leaves ones mind
reeling!
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And that together someday we might see
The pieces of us both fit in embrace"
I particularly love these verses, Stevie. We can only hope that such will be. Thank you for this gift. Love and peace to you my friend,
Regis
Love Tinka
The poem was heartfelt - I pray that your desire in the last strophe becomes reality.
Stand Strong!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Peace. Joyce
Follow the master and the pieces will fall into the right place,
God Bless,
Lew
And your dream will come true; maybe in a different form ... for it seems we are creators of our reality and destiny ... always evolving...
Love, Suzie :-D
Reindeer
for connection at the end of one's destiny with a yet missing
someone or essence; is indeed stunningly surreal! The last three
lines evoke both a an epitaph and eulogy; utterly mezmerizing.
Brilliant presentation here again Stevie. Leaves ones mind
reeling!