Coffee House (poem) by Roger A. Ochs on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 24, 2002

I love my coffee....did smoke but quit 11 years ago....thank goodness for that
but erotic coffee...never thought of coffee in that way....because i have mine black like a crow...and no BO

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2002

exceptionally wry...but there's that bit about spilt milk...hey, there are still some dark lairs about where we can breathe and burn...all night long. Just gotta know where to look ;)**Mari**

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on November 4, 2002

very entertaining write. =)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 31, 2002

Great humor in this piece. I'm still laughing. And real talent, too.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2002

Loved it all....but that first stanza....well, well, well you Sir get me thinking! Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2002

Ahhh... my dearest Roger.. you are 'playing my tune'.. Phil, Woody, Joan, Bobby, and that other lovely Ochs, Phil (Pleasures of the Harbor?.. ahhh).. we smoked where we sat and floated with that woman of ease.. you have painted a picture I can climb into and sing with.. thank you for a sweet trip back.. I was the one next to you.. I noticed you too..sigh.. how about a duet? tehe. katy. xox.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

Amusing picture and I enjoyed the written work. I was told once from a friend that he could picture me owning a coffee shop with books,art and music. I can picture me there reading the books, and enjoying the art and music :-) Are there any places like this left? and where?

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

Glad i only eat the ice cream...hagan daas

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

A lot has changed since the old days of coffee houses. It's gotten too trendy. Well done.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

Roger,
Very Good Write!! Enjoyed this very much!

Maria

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

Yes Roger this is a good write. I have beent here before and can't handle it anymore. Bill

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

this is good, and i loved the cartoon you used to go along with this poem! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((((HUGS))))) :)

Reviewed by Richard Croft

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

You either take your mocha latte, or go outside and smoke a lot heh? As chain habits go, I still say Starbucks is worse than cigarettes -- though I know a lot of people with fake coughs who'd disagree. Nice.

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

I only frequent dark places these days, I am so much better on the eye then.
ahh, play it again Sam......or was it Roger.
enjoyed your memories.

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

Bravo this one smoked and i didn't have to go outside

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

Enjoyed this...

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on October 29, 2002

wait up i'll join you
josie