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Can I Come Home, Yet?
by Las Vegas Patti → (All Poetry by Las Vegas Patti)
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Each time I thought it was time to "go home" again, it was not my time but to those who have visited "home", the memory leaves you wistful.

So far, you have won our encounters I begin to run towards the goal line Ball in Hand I can feel it I can see it A relief that is You tackle me and I must begin again This time I see the jump My horse and I We set up, begin to push over I feel us both lose our balance Down to the ground we go Crying, red faced and angry I rise again I quietly set up This time, determined to reach my goal For a moment in time, I am jovial Allowing myself to feel like old again I primp, I laugh, I joke Because I know you now I see how you block me Why, I do not know On the other side The sun shines brightly, happiness is for all time I will begin again Next time, I may come in first

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Reviews of "Can I Come Home, Yet?"

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on May 21, 2009

Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 19, 2009

Being blocked isn't fun and should be fought nonstop, or remove yourself from the situation. Love it. A work of art. Liz

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on May 19, 2009

Very heartwarming- this may be the question of the soldiers in Iraq.

Cynthia

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on May 19, 2009

well said

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 18, 2009

I loved this poem, that is the question of ages isn't it, I guess the answer would depend on you, and where you find your home at
In Christs Love
Michelle~

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