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Way to Go
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Way to go
by The Poetess (SRP)

I recently heard a preacher say
That "women should follow men."
And I was sure I'd misunderstood
Until he said it again!
Oh God help our lost world-
Help us all to know
That You are the only one
Who can lead our way to go.
And please help the ego -
This darker side of men,
To open up to Your Love
And find their Hearts again.
So we can ALL take our place,
Standing side by side,
And fill this lonely gap
That's growing far too wide.
No matter which gender,
The ones we need to lead,
Are those who open a Heart
For Love to plant a seed.

 

 

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 Reviews of "Way to Go"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 13, 2010
Prayerful and meaningful; truly I feel sorry for that preacher, Poetess. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 5, 2010
Well said! Great job!

Anna

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Inherent sweetness to convey a great message!

Axilea

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Every good preacher is confused! This poem flows with gentleness and skill. You are gifted Poetess.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Lovely indeed. Everyone knows men refuse to ask for directions when they are (frequently)lost. Thus it follows the preacher was confused when he suggested women should follow men. Patrick

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Beautifully rhymed, and the message ... well ... Amen.
Yours is a delicate garden. Peace and wisdom to you ...
richard

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Wonderful writing sweet lady..enjoyed...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Well said!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Great write. Very well said indeed. God bless.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
So true !
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
"...For Love to plant a seed" .. yes!
Over the centuries so many men have felt threatened by women and have suppressed their potential and denied them opportunities, it's a shameful history.
And some preachers say the strangest things - yesterday, one was heard to say that Jesus was HIV positive!! Now where did that come from?

A fine poem Poetess!

John

Reviewed on September 3, 2010
;) - Morgan


Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
Bravo, Poetess!
Blessings,
Christine


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