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A Rusty Heart
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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The path to the garden sometimes has obstacles


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There is a rusty heart

Surrounded by beauty, green tapestry

And peaches

 

Cobwebs cling

To the bells

covered in rust

 

Like old bitter memories

That jump out in front

Of spring’s glorious leaves

 IIluminated from above

 

It blocks the path to the garden below

And the roses

And the apples

And the happiness

This rusty old heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "A Rusty Heart"
Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Sounds like you need some oil. ;-)

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 1, 2009
A most meaningful metaphorical offering, Patrick. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
So true , there are obstacles , but if one tires they might overcome them.Old Memories can be put aside in hopes of a brighter day! One can't chage whats happened in the past , its the here and now thats important...M...

Reviewed on June 16, 2009
Hi Patrick, I like the allegory in this! Blockage is never good, especially when a heart has rusted over.... thank you for sharing this...

In Spirit,
Bear


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