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The Looking Glass
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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It's just poetry.

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Staring through the looking glass

What has become of us, alas

Silly nuzzles, warm embrace

Now just tears upon my face

Oh wicked glass deny my pain

The agony I cannot feign

For lost in seasons gone before

The fading light, a closing door

My heart dissolves in cloaked despair

I wonder when, I wonder where

Will reflections lead into the night

To guide the soul away from light

And pay the price for love’s trespass

For staring through the looking glass

 

 

 

Copyright 2009 Patrick Granfors

 


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 Reviews of "The Looking Glass"
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
I like everything about this poem, the flow, the message.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Absolutely gorgeous! Wonderful write Patrick!

Anna

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on October 18, 2009
Beautiful. e

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 18, 2009
Quite deep, my friend.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 18, 2009
This one reminds me of Lewis Carrol's "Alice through the looking glass" but with and added quality, the serene sadness and the shy tears. That glass should be a smoked one, to hide the sorrow.
Well done my friend.

Georg


Reviewed on October 17, 2009
Powerfully penned reflection, Patrick, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 17, 2009
Superb poem, Patrick! you truly are a very accomplished poet!
Although you do very well to hide behind your usual witty verses
and subtle cynicism-)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 17, 2009
Very well done, Patrick. I'm impressed with the balance of your verse, meter and rhyme. Excellent job my friend.

Reviewed on October 17, 2009
Excellent write, Patrick; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on October 17, 2009
Hi! Glad I found you. This is wonderful.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 17, 2009
THIS IS MORE THAN JUST POETRY...THIS IS BEAUTY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSP9RATIONS

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 17, 2009
I think I have a new favorite from you. This is excellent.


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