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Aberration
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Aberration denied

Cold sweat ensues

Premonition envelops

You knew it all along

 

Weary conscience collapses

Into the reality of conscious deception

The door is locked and sealed

The bars no longer illusion

 

The darkness steals a victim

Cries in the void

Silence in tune with its echo

Reverberates

 

Mind thread slackens

Dangling over the abyss

Searching for a spool

Needle’s first calling

 

Spool turns as threads tighten

Whispers ring past the quiet lie

Needle replies

Oblivion serves her master

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 

 

 

 
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 Reviews of "Aberration"
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on July 10, 2010
The progression is horribly wonderful! Good work!

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
Reviewed on July 10, 2010
Pray the prey dead it stay, darkness weaves its own design, for all that needle sews a suit for all to fit and wear, too much weight that's on the brain, will drive a man insane, or the devil to skate on thin ice. Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 10, 2010
Dark and Haunting, Indeed.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 10, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 10, 2010
Excellent, Patrick.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
Dark, foreboding, enchanting. I love it!!!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
Wise is the shapeshifter who comes from centuries ago where she learned the deceivers ways. The she-owl has chosen her alliances well to defend against territorial invasion. Aberration is indeed, a remnant scribe from the leftover attempt of recruit of the evil talon of the interloper, and perhaps portrays itself as something so much more than poetry can give on this plane of life...intuition is more than a word, it's a savior and the wise owl knows it, Patrick.

Love and Respect,
Sage
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
Quite a ride- like a haunted hay ride.
I'll get on again.

John
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
Ooh, this is intricately woven Patrick!
Threaded with deep haunting words and ideas ~
Awesome!
Christine
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
Darkly dangerous. I like the mystery.

Ron
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
What mainstream, this is kinda horror scary to me...or I read it wrong, but to each their own idea...ed
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