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White Dog
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I read Richard Cederberg's powerful poem about depression, entitled "Black Dog" and found it compelling. If you haven't read it, I would certainly recommend it.


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I am the white dog

I seek to vanquish the black dog

Before my charge

Succumbs to its dreaded presence

 

It does not fear me

It scarcely acknowledges my existence

Why should it?

I have no power

 

Other than to observe

Its lethal stalking

That wisps through me

As if I were an apparition

 

I too read the signs as

My charge’s vacant stare

Deep into torment

Reveals pain known only to her

 

As the black beast consumes

At will

The prime cuts of her life

Leaving behind

Only scraps of misery

 

My gentle muzzle is no match

For its jagged compliment

Slicing through me without leaving a mark

Reopening her scars

That had nearly healed

 

It is as relentless

As I am determined

To deflect each intrusion

By illuminating the dark shadows

With the antidote

Of love

And understanding

 

I am the white dog

And I realize that

Without my charge

I am but one short step away

From the emptiness of life's pound

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "White Dog"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 15, 2010
A very personal concern shown here.

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 15, 2010
i like this bit of balance

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 15, 2010
It's good that the pendulum swings both ways Patrick. And it's a blessing, too, that the white Light dispells the darkness.
Blessings to you ...
richard

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 15, 2010
The Native American version is two wolves battling inside of us, and it is up to each of us to determine which of them will win.

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
What a relief to leave the Valley of Despair with the black dog and enter the white dog's domain. Good dog, good dog.
Connie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
The never-ending battle between light and dark, well done...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
Well done, Patrick.

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
Deeper than deep. good write.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
I put him in the dog cemetary long ago. No tombstone, no remorse.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
2 dogs, in a battle to the death, equally strong and ferocious, who wins?? The one you feed. Awesome writing, talented pen.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
Ha! Disarmingly high-spirited and quirky!
Love this poem ~
Best Wishes,
Christine


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