Dream Song (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on December 14, 2010

Sometimes our words heal us even if we throw them out into a vast silence.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on December 13, 2010

This piece has a lovely lyrical bounce to it, Patrick! I love this!

Anna

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 12, 2010

Your dream was valid. Sound needs an atmosphere to be heard. On the other hand, to catch a dream is rare as air.

Ron

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on December 12, 2010

Sounds like a beautiful dream song Patrick!! Most of our best dreams are forgotten when we wake. I have tried with all my might to remember but I guess that means they were intended just for me!! Love, and peace always~ ~Chessly

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 12, 2010

Keep Writin, and Keep Dreamin, my friend.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on December 11, 2010

Yeah...I can relate at times. This is a good write Patrick.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on December 11, 2010

reminds me of an h.p. lovecraft story called the "the quest of iranon" which i'm quite fond of as of this little gem patrick.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 11, 2010

Very nicely done, Patrick.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

well said

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

I tried to share it with the world
It fell on deaf ears it would seem
So often we do not transcend
The things we do while in a dream

I find myself completely understanding and empathizing with what you have expressed within your verses here, Patrick. I love the flow of this creative piece. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

such truth to this, sadly i guess, but if one thing we do touches just one other--well, then we have had an impact

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

Very nice! The solitude of unshared dreams and something of the human condition in your words.

Axilea

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

This is meltingly wistful. Aren't they wonderful escapes, though!?
You can do anything you please in a dream, never tell a soul. I do it all, believe me.
Thanks for this,
Christine

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

And here I thought you wrote everything you have ever written while in dream world...e

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

Can you imagine if all we did in dreams became real life facts? But you have hit on a great sadness: that whatever is said or done in a dream usually goes unseen by the ones we love most...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on December 10, 2010

You too? I've walked that same walk and talked that same talk. I'm a lousy singer though, and I always figured that's why no one listens. Nicely done Sir Patrick. Thanks Dick