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Bend
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Where does it start

A tiny compromise

Nobody’s perfect after all

 

How is it possible

For sweetness to degrade

To savagery

 

God help us

 

Your demons have taken their toll

Consumed our possibilities

Crushed our hearts

 

It’s not your fault

 

Reeds bend in the wind

We bent too

Now we are broken

 

What remains is guilt

In a field of broken reeds

Saturated with grief

 

Wondering

Could we have bent

Just a little more

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright 2014 Patrick A Granfors

 


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 Reviews of "Bend"
Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on August 7, 2014
ahh we see this other facet of 'patrick'again...so so touching this was and with such an emotional question that all readers will give pause to and remember their own times of hindsight.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 7, 2014

poignant read

Reviewed on July 6, 2014
There are many broken souls around, but being humans we've learned how to bend and mend our broken pieces best way we know how.

Sandie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 6, 2014
deep meaning here Patrick profoundly written
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 6, 2014
Very profoundly philosophical. Not your usual humorous or natural poem. But the dog gives me a clue. I have noticed how a perfectly calm and friendly dog will suddenly turn vicious and do great harm to innocent things like other animals and children. I think you're trying to alert us to the fact that we have a tendency to "fly off the handle" to easily when we could have just let the problem evaporate in time.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 6, 2014
it's never too later to straighten up and bend against the wind as long as we are not already broken ...

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on July 6, 2014
Heartfelt poem. We all miss her.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 6, 2014
I have bent just about as far as this old body can...I am creaking from the bending...maybe you can suggest what else I can do to make things better...? JD

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 5, 2014
Your verses make me think of a great deal of possibilities, Patrick - none happy ones. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 5, 2014
We have become a greedy all-for-me generation.


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