MY CAPTAIN! (poem) by Jms Bell on AuthorsDen

MY CAPTAIN!
by Jms Bell → (All Poetry by Jms Bell)
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...one of many who cling to their faith and to the captain of their souls, while making this 'sure', but often rough, journey home...

*Even when I embarked with my ticket for Beulah Land* *the waters were rough...the ship reeling to and fro* *But the tried and true Captain, with piercing eyes...* *full of love and compassion, bid me 'come'...and I did so* *~~~~* *The Captain, He did not lie or compromise with* *forecasting an uneventful calm and smooth sail* *I remember He said, there are going to be hard times* *journeying will be difficult...winds and waves will assail* *~~~~* *He said, at times you'll feel the ship is about to sink* *it'll seem like everyone on board will be destroyed* *But I promise you...if you'll only obey and hold on* *our destination will be reached ...eternal bliss enjoyed* *~~~~* *I will not disembark ...He gave me His Word...* *I will not, He said, leave you or abandon ship* *I'll stay with this vessel which carries 'precious' cargo* *for in My Saving Blood...each parcel has been dipped* *~~~~* *So when bombarded with unmerciful torrents* *that rage against the hull and flood the deck* *I hear the Captain calling out bidding me...hold on!* *stay with the ship! it won't go down...nor will it wreck!* *~~~~* *Obeying orders I cling fiercely...ship tossed & turned* *soul drenched & battered with the punishment of the air* *And I know if I was mapping the path of this course* *I'd have turned back long ago...leaving His promises there* *~~~~* *But in the black of day the lightning flashes...I see Him* *still in charge steering...standing staunchly at the helm* *Seeing through the darkness...He is undaunted, yet...* *strong and masterful ...the waves cannot overwhelm* *~~~~* *Weakened...against the pressures of the elements* *I make my way to Him... He turns and smiles* *It's there, I know...I'll stay with Him until the end* *as He's brought me safe so far...miles upon miles* *~~~~* *I am content where 'ev I may go...surely, He'll abide* *moreover...so grateful for His loving care, but then...* *He has never lost a ship, albeit...forever and far beyond* *He is my Lord, my Savior...Jesus! He is...My Captain!* *2Chron 13:12, Ps 107:23-32* *copyright; 03/01/2009 - joyce m bell*
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Reviewed by D. Mullis

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

I really enjoyed reading this poem! You have a wonderful way of expressing your poetry--keep it up as God gives it!

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2009

Hi Joyce,

This is so true to life. We just have to hang on and trust Him until the end of our journey. I love your poetry.

Patty

Reviewed by John Domino

Thank you for the reminder. We both have the SAME Father in Heaven.
We have so much in common. Just as there are many kinds of flowers in the earth all need sun and water. All rely on Our Father.

Amen

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Joyce,
I am so very happy to be reading your poem. Your words are a healing balm to my soul. Very well written. You should publish your poems. You are truly gifted.
God Bless you abundantly.
Nicole

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

Joyce this is such a beautiful poem, He is the only one who never lies to us.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 25, 2009

Wonderful inspiration. Thank you.

Reviewed by Daniel Keith

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Beautiful Joyce. What an excellent example of the Lord's never ending love for us. May God Bless You.
Daniel

Reviewed by Don Peavy Sr

It takes courage in this post-Christian age for one to stand against the currents and declare that one is not "the captain of my fate ... the master of my soul" as does the writer of "Invictus," and say instead that one's captain is Jesus. The OT reference though is troubling given it refers to God and your poem refers to Jesus. A NT reference seems more appropriate such as Matt. 14:22-36. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Joyce you are such an angel! This is just what
I need at this very moment, words straight from
the throne room!! May Abba Father bless you His
instrument!! The pen of a ready writer you are!!

Love And Prayers
Always!!!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 9, 2009

A well written poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

An awesome write dear lady... "Perseverance!" Blessings, Janice Beaty Springs

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Joyce this is a very embraceful poem for the spirit
it exudes hope for the passage within having faith
Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

God bless you for such a wonderful and inspirational piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Fantastic poem, with wisdom message, and a glorious tribute to our "Captain"! Thank you , Joyce!...ET

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Very beautiful writing sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

This is truly an inspiration and tale from the heart...beautiful Joyce,,,we must keep our faith.
Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Faith in one's Captain truly is a marvelous thing.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Oh Joyce, this has got to be my favorite of your poems. I hope this can be published somewhere. This is just wonderful!Your gifts really shine and your faith and love of Jesus. Wonderful!!!!

With Love,
Cindy