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Sweet Pea Plumed

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, April 13, 2004

Ethereal flumed perfume, dainty pink
Of pea design, exudes bouquet of Spring’s
Auspice, wafting pastel sight and smell; wink
And wave and breath pure bliss plush season brings.

Ecstatic pulse enflames petite tendril’s
Progressive search, tipsy blossoms angle
To reach for slipstream sun, ablaze, until
Portentous winds pluck petals. Symbolic…

Edifice collapses as plumed pea-forms
Grasp at growth, proud-greeting portfolio
Epicures love of prolific reforms,
While recumbent supports lie dead below.

Sweet pea, effloresce into fallow rhymes;
Seed fused-words before decrescendo climbs.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photo by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 4/13/04

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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2004

"flumed"? em.. I don't have my dictionary here.. oh, wait, that was Adam's and he moved out.. sigh.. my favorite part was "tipsy blossoms".. I bonded with that phrase because it's playful and, to my mind, just right for these sweetie pie flowers... ("bonded"?.. Ah, well.. communing with nature is my treat). smile... you have, my dear Erin, a captivating vocabulary, indeed! What I most wished to do here was simply sit by those 'plumes' .. your photography is truly poetic and I am, if nothing else, a person of visuals. If 'a picture is worth 1000 words', and it can be, then you picked the right ones, once again..love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on April 16, 2004

Whew! My goodness, you're talented!

Reviewed by Eva Black (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2004

Your artistic veins are supported by a great soul. I admire your gifted mind.

This poetical jewel you share here is a masterpiece that deserves the Trophy of poetical uniqueness.

Eva Black, BFA

Reviewed by David Livingstone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 14, 2004

This is an enriching and outstanding poetical composition.

Thank you for posting this work of art.

David Livingstone

Reviewed by Margarita Caligaris (Reader)

Reviewed on April 14, 2004

“Sweet Pea Plumed” is indeed a collector’s item. It is a masterpiece to be studied and discussed.

I agree with the Review below. It does cover all on this piece of Art.

Congratulations!

Margarita Caligaris, Litt.D., Ph.D.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 14, 2004

This “Sweet Pea Plumed” is the challenge of the century, – using poetic license that complies with Poetry, – for it transcends the rules and gives birth to a brilliant piece of art, surreal, symbolistical and natural. Salvador Dali would like to read this one! Paul Verlaine, Stéphane Marllamé and Arthur Rimbaud, would call Shakespeare to show how Poet Erin E. Moen can teach them.

On this twenty-fourth day of Spring, I Salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

Nice one, Erin.

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