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Shallow Me Not

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, June 15, 2004


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Reflected in this me-made lake, clearer,
my desperation to escape; release,
I could reach it all if I could mirror
the reflection mirrored in my lake. Please

shallow not my wayward thoughts, shadow not,
though shallows seen are in my dreams – don’t loose
the thoughts that self-defeat when depths are sought
and shallows rise to cover mirror's dues.

Reflections shadowed in my mirror, lake
of tears and drowning fears of shallow years
reflecting leaves of tree above can make
or break the mirrored self, which once was dear.

Shallows now reflect the fight, human strife
is mirrored in reflections of my life.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photo by Erin Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 6/15/04
 


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Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2004
Dear Erin;

My stars, Gal! This is something!

Doc

Reviewed by Lori Torrio (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
Erin--this is a great one... (I still have to see this lake)

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
Sensational, almost riddle-like in its enthusiasm.
Great job Erin.

Reviewed on June 15, 2004
Powerful emotions runs through the course of this poem. Well-expressed.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
Dear girl, this is amazing stuff. I am awestruck -- the phrasing, the rhyme scheme, the mood, the emotions. Superb, Erin, simply put, this is superb.

Reviewed on June 15, 2004
(((erin)))

strong, heartfelt, brilliant write--BRAVA! one of your best :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *a keeper*

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
No, fair poet, dear friend... you are like the clearest, unsullied, mountain lake that never sees run-off or human damage... where the bottom can be seen, even at its deepest depth. What was, was... you are crystal and sparkly today... and new. Leave the shallows to the minnows. The water is vast and mysterious and tomorrow is where the adventure lies. Only look back for wisdom. katy xox. Damned fine poetry, Miss! xox.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
well written Erin!!

Love Tinka


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