Sun Signs III: Sun-Smile Eyes
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, May 17, 2005
Smile-eyed Sun, you’ve gathered your kin, daughters,
Sons, cousins -- all relative; End begun
Without end, send sweet wisdom’s starred rapture
Dawning into these eyes of sight undone!
My friends -- no more pride, no place to hide,
With earth undone. I feel the heat; the beat
Of family ties esteems our long-lived guide,
Awakening in Son’s disguise. Complete
The cycle seasons reap, beam with pride, for
Consensus of senses realizes
A new world’s begun, love everyone, lore
Will come to win. If we idealize
No deity of piety. For gods,
In realities, can die, when at odds.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photograph by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/17/05
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Your internal structure and meter are outstanding, as is your imagery; fantastic poem!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
love Tinka