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Snow Shower Ache

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, February 4, 2004


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Outside; inside; ‘in her mind.’

Predawn; alarm awakens; ‘still want to sleep.’

Clouds thicken; coffee is made; ‘groan-chores of school day.’

A few flakes fall; cats scooted out door; ‘got to wake the girls!’

Snow blur comes closer; jumble-dressed rushing; ‘please let it snow.’

Pellets sleet softness; faces turn skywards; ‘love the sting on my cheeks!’

Quick rush of storm; laughs mingle with smiles; ‘drat, school’s almost starting!’

Air opaques; time used up by need; ‘I’m missing it all!’

Storm's over; alone and alive; ‘I hate this ache…’

Outside; inside; ‘out of her mind.’

Erin Moen
2/4/04
Photo by Erin Moen
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2004
Erin,
Great write. If it is a storm you are looking for, you can come visit me. We are having a full spectrum for the fourth time in three weeks. Rain, Snow, Sleet, Freezing Rain, Ice and what ever else the weather people can think to call it. I love the cold temps, but I would like to see the ground again...lol

Hugs,

The Voice

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2004
a fab write. enjoyed reading this.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 5, 2004
I can relate. Great write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
Great write!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
This is a beautiful write, Erin. I like its expression of gentle frustration at missing the excitement of the little storm.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
I LIKE this, Erin! Wonderful realism and scene-painting without losing your skillful lyricism!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
Erin this is great writing...I love the last line...I am glad to see someone is writing serious poetry while we play around here LOL...floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
Can relate to this Erin!!

Deep and Lonesome write!!

Love Tinka


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