This Emptiness Inside” (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 28, 2005

Painful and disconsolate
Very expressive
Peter

Reviewed on May 28, 2005

Ouch! I feel the pain! Wonderfully expressed, Tinka!

Reviewed on May 28, 2005

This was so very sad and excellently expressive of that dark despair that troubles our lives, just got to me Tinka,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 28, 2005

This is very sad, Tinka; I wish I could say that I cannot relate to it but it just is not so. I know that of which you write. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 28, 2005

I whisper some love word
Hoping they will reach you
Comfort you wherever you are

A truly sad piece, Tinka, but your heart shines through.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

Sis you are going to mess up my great mood and make me lose my blush of wine...okay I'll shed a tear, can't help it with those words and that pic jeez louise...

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

Sad write, with a strong message... to admit vunerability and emptiness is a step to being "full" and whole... very strong write and picture

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

Sad poem, my friend..but well written and moving.
I hope all is allright with you.

Love, ~Linda

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

I know to well these feelings but I could never capture them so well as you have in this verse. It is not always what we show on the outside and to the world what we actually feel and keep hidden away from all but the closest people we know. Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

Deeply felt, deeply delivered.

ron

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

What You Don't Really Understand Is All Of Us Have same Emptiness Inside_

Most Are Simply To Weak To Admit Too It!!

Romantic You write On..

TRASK

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

Tinka ...This piece moved me .
I really relate well to this poem
it's written like a professional!
Great Job!

Rich Suarez

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

Bravo1 Fine poem. Apt pic. A winning combination.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

It's good to have someone who draws us back from the dark places. Good stuff, Tinka. That picture is sad enough for the whole Den. LOL

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

Wonderful write, Tinka, and the graphic fits it perfectly!

Peace.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

a beauty of a write, tinka, and the poem fits the mood of this melancholy write so well! very nice; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on May 27, 2005

sad but loving poem and the picture with it is a real tear jerker, she looks so sad

Sitting by this “Old Fathers” clock