The Shower Hour (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on June 26, 2005

This is a great read, steamy?? maybe if you include the steam, i think more a sad wanting write than an erotic read,but done with a lot of style and talent, superbly crafted Tinka, very well done ...Mark xx

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on June 23, 2005

lol I had to laugh at Sara's comment. Yes, she's right, this is a steamy write but it is more. It is once again filled with longing and a sense of sadness and loss. You write so well!
Take care
Chanti

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 22, 2005

A hand held shower head would melt your ice, make your head spin and leave you screaming then exhausted. Plus they don't smoke, drink, curse or slap you around. And when you're finished with them, you just turn off the water, dry off and get on with you day all happy and content.

Steamy write. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 20, 2005

Tinka...HUGS....I wish i were the water....LOL...such a sensual write...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 20, 2005

beautiful stuff, tinka; very nice!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on June 20, 2005

One of your finer writes.
Now hurry up and get warm, wouldn't want you to catch a cold.

Peace and sunshine

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on June 20, 2005

Superbly sensous shower Tinka

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo

Reviewed on June 20, 2005

Tinka, I love this. Great write!!!

...Michael

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

Beautiful!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

great write Tinka
love water poetry you know that?

William ....Peace & Love

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

These are great lines, Tinka:
"Searching for you
Behind the wall of my dreams"
and
" feel you
Dancing upon
The emptiness"
This is a beautiful poem; it sparks so many emotions in the reader from sad to elated, from weary to soothed.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

wow Tinka ,
This is amazingly erotic and sensual then reality
of the cold truth streams in well....with the music
playing all the while.
Really Good.

Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

So warmly melancholly and yet with just a faint hint of erotica that might have been, great write Tink.

Felix

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

Wet and wild. Smooth and seductive. Sweet and sincere. Adjectives to describe how this poetry mtakes me feel.

Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

I hold mine in the shower!

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

Potent eroticism ending with exquisite reality. Excellant.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

I have been in this shower. GREAT write!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

Okay, okay, I get the picture, I smell and need a shower, just hate to waste water alone...;) Ed

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

Getting bold are we, Tinka? Can't wait for you next poem. LOL Liked this one by the way.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

How many of us have sought the solace of a shower to shed our tears?Powerful ending, Tinka!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 19, 2005

Tinka this is so beautifully written, but so sad with the cold ending. I hope your showers and your love warms up soon!;-)
A wonderful combination pic poem music...

Love,
Eileen