On this beach of loneliness today I build a Sand Castle of hope and love An ocean so blue…malevolent and dark I build it with grains of love Grains of sand wetted by teardrop of gold And with pain deep within my heart my love I painted it in colors of the rainbow But one moment too late A wave of gossip washed it away Just to leave the footprints of hurt behind Footprints so deep…it left me blind Too blind to see That love could hurt so bad Tomorrow I might try again To build a love castle in vain Just living my dreams… build on sand As I still wait
To walk this beach of love with you I still need your love To make my life beautiful I need footprints of love And Castles of joy Not of love and hope That gets washed away everyday!!
“Broken heart no joy in life Everlasting footprints left within A heart misused and abused Many may come
Staggering, Tinka... fair takes the bubbles out of all me Christmas fizz-pop, but perhaps a little relieved to see the 2003 copyright... perhaps that sandcastle has been removed to the rock by now, and is weathering a little better... I certainly hope so; if not, just gotta build higher and better, I guess! You certainly know how to create emotion-filled writes that build up and then leave us awash with swirling eddies and sandstorms! Every tear precious and stored in a diamond bottle, Tinka. Ha-ha-p-pyyyy Chr-christ-ma-ma-assss ....xxxxxxxx K xx
Beautiful, but so sad, Tink. I have trouble knowing if you are really sad or if you are just the queen of melancholy poetry. You are that. I wish I could cheer you up. Anyway, have some Season cheer and enjoy the Holidays. Lovely pic, poem and song. Love and [[[[[[[[hugs]]]]]]]
Leland
Sweet words of sadness that linger in the mind but ache in the heart with a longing to make things better...even knowing that only love and time can do that.
That is good picture of you too Tinka.
Tinka...I can only guess that you write from hard experience here...and yes, this is a sad piece but brutally real, for anyone who has been there. Composition wise, this is an excellent piece of work...you flow of imagery and rhythm is splendid.
Tinka I wish for you all that you dream could be yours, and I pray one day that love will cover you in all its glory! Be weell and smile Sis, frowns only drive love away!Wonderful poetry!
Tinks, this one was good but like everyone else said sad. Love will hit ya gf someday and it will be a deserving one that will knock you right off your feet!
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A Collection of Voices from Around the World is more than just a poetry compilation. It is a partnership of poets from around the globe brought together by an internet poetry forum. That forum, poetrypages.com, has been the home of many a fine poet s
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Leland
Carole...love and peace
Bob H
To build a love castle in vain
Just leave the last two words out above, and go for it, Tinky.
That is good picture of you too Tinka.
Felix
Love,
Eileen
Huggles
Tina
Love Tinks-A-Tot
It is best to build your castle on firm foundations...
Love
Peter