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The Pain In Knowing
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Song: "A Tear Fell" ******* The Pain In Knowing The pain in knowing As truth reveals itself Never to be number one Love moved the other way Ultimate price to be paid For a love so very far away Nothing more Than the deepest pain to gain Time embraced In wide-open space Fleeting moments of happiness Now ripped from a bleeding heart Left behind Sadness deep Deep within the chambers Of a dying heart That still slowly beats In rhythm of pain The pain of knowing Never to be number one The ultimate price to pay For a love so very far away Time embraced In wide open space Fleeting moments of happiness Now gone� The pain in knowing It belongs to another** Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes All Rights Reserved.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 8, 2008

Dear Tinka,

You are the best!!

Love,

Lance

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

Painful read expertly done!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

You're still Number One to all your many AD friends,Tinky.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 4, 2006

So beautifully poignant Tinka.
love and peace...

Carole

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Another beauty.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

I am moved to tears dearest Tinks, this is so sad but beautifully expressed...hope remains eternal.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Beautiful poetry, well expressed.
cowboy

Reviewed by Letitia Blount

What a beautiful and sad poem. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Sad, but beautiful poem sis! The future always beckons!

Eileen

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Sad and haunting Tinky! Hope is always there though.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Another. Or not! But be who you are... You tak the reigns..Tinks

Reviewed by George Carroll

A sad and forlorn write Tinky-Doll, better days ahead bury the past.

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

never settle for less than number one, such a poignant poem.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

beautiful heart you have, Tinka; a lovely and gentle poem you have penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Yes indeed this betrays a gentle and loving heart Tinka
Your time will surely come, as night follows day !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Your work reflects a gentle heart.

Ultimate price to be paid