Save Me (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 5, 2006

i like your work

Reviewed on January 28, 2006

Strongly emotive and meaningful verses, TinkaSweets. Many will related. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on January 26, 2006

Such a beautiful melancholy write Tinks, but in the end you are the only one in control of how you feel...it always has been your choice.
Time to grab the world by the tail and shake up your life...love and peace to you...
Carole

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 26, 2006

there's so much good within your soul ... rejoice in being alive ... let the good times flow ...

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 26, 2006

watch the hand of the devil Tink, nothing last forever, hold your breath for an hour, if you survive, you'll be happy to what's really a joy

Reviewed by Sandy Knauer

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

Loneliness is a state of mind - and I think we all need to experience every state at some point in order to understand the others. Hopefully, if this is autobiographical, it will be a brief visit in the State of Loneliness. (I seem to vacation in the State of Confusion most often)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

No loneliness can befall you if you don't allow it too...write when you need to, as I think I am home for few days what with this virus...Ed

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

oh tink..what a beautifully expressed emotion of longing. you, girl, are an exquisite artiste...and sister. big hugs to you. i hope that all of your fantasy and dreams that are wonderful, come true for you. you deserve every good thing that love and life have to offer.
always
krissy

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

Potent and fettled with longing, Tinks.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

This is deeply sad Tinks, I have to agree with the board here but always remember you have your AD family too.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

Some people cannot be happy unless they are sad.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

But why remain lonely. That is ones choice. Our life is what we make of it. The more one reach's out the less lonely one is..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

I must agree with everyone commenting below, Tinky - especially Trask. We must all save ourselves.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

Only You Can Save Yourself...

Lonliness Is Pain Of Being Alone
Solitude Is Glory Of Being Alone!

In Being Alone I Found Myself
In Pain I Found (God)!

Tinka You Must Pre-Occupy Your Mind With Sum Thing Else,i.e. Create New Hobby----Go To Homeless Shelter--Help Little Children Or Seniors_

You Will Find Self Gratification In Your Good Deeds,i.e. Maybe Even Meet New Man Fall In True Love...

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

My goodness Tinks you have me with tears! Just the thought of anyone feeling so forlorn is awful. The poetry is fantastic, but if you feel this way tis a shame, and you'd best listen to Peter! "With God all things are possible"

Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

Oh Tinka today I can feel the pain as it seems to be in the very air even where I sit. Great write as always.

Felix

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

You write the tear jerkers so well.......
Love ya!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

The only one who can save you from loneliness is yourself Tinka
Its a big mistake depending on any one mere mortal delivering the goods !
Give yourself a shake, and get on with it !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 25, 2006

Too much sadness for one person to handle, too many women sing this dirge of lonliness and broken hearts.