Total Eclipse (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

"Total Eclipse"

By the touch of love
My eyes started to shine again
By the touch of love
I have a smile upon my face
By the touch of love
I have some hopes and dreams again
By the touch of love
There is this fire�
That burns inside of me
There is determination
To find happiness�
Once in this lifetime
Now�

Is love... that pain
I feel... deep in my heart?
Or is it...
That lonely feeling

My empty soul feels when I am alone?
Do I still have the time?
How long will I stay strong?
In the need to belong
In total eclipse of my heart

Now touched by love

MY EDITOR

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine

Reviewed on April 18, 2006

True - Love gives us the capacity for happiness.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 13, 2006

The Touch of Love can be most powerful, Tinky.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

you certainly have the right to feel any way you desire ...

very moving poem, Tinka ... nicely done ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Sad but beautifully written.

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Tinka,

"My empty soul feels when I am alone?" That is so sad. At the end of the day, the best friend in life is yourself. A beautiful yet sorrowful poem.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Dearest Tinka
You are touched by love and you touch everyone else with that love you so freely share with others. Thank you for you dear Tinka!!
Love, love, love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Beautiful, Tinka, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Sweet as the writer.

Felix

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

A good touch of loving poetry

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Love the write and love the picture!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Tinks
Jerry is right, you need to be more upbeat and forward thinking...go with the flow !
That looks like Buddha in the picture...lols
Love
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Well written poem and intriguing picture!
You are always intersting to read Tinks!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

ah Tinka, so lovely, this is beautiful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Even when you are happy, you try to find things to not be happy about. Hey! Go with the flow, kid.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Tinka~

Beautiful write and picture; simply enjoyed!

Happy Easter wishes are on their way to you today! Have a great one! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Talent ooozes from every word.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

this is wonderful and I love the photo as well! You are very talented, Tinka!

Susan