Constellation Of Love (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Hopes fruit, ripe, ready to eat

Yet hopelessly out of reach
I search for you in star lit sky

Imprisoned within my narrow space
Up into this dark night
Where there is no sunlight to trace

Embracing the Love we Share

Where deep thoughts are not shy
My dreams giving way to fantasies tonight
Through old and teary eyes

I pinpoint you in this star lit night

My constellation of love

Etched in the heavens

My heart takes to the sky

Rocketing to your arms

My love brings more than life in meaning
The reason why
Our love is visible in my eyes
Sweetheart words failed me tonight
Your place can never be filled
There is a big emptiness within my heart

Missing you in every moment
Your voice echoing now still yet again
Oh!

I beg you �heart�

Be quite please
That is fate�s choice not ours
Killing the braveness within
Leaving nothing but pouring tears

Missing you

Copyright � 2006 Tinky & Micky Wannabe B JJ ks

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

Beautiful

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

This strikes deep into the heart freeing love into the heavens

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

beautifully written!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

Beautiful write, Tinka; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

Powerfully emotive and meaningful; thank you for sharing TinkaSweets. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

A truly heartfelt heavenly piece, Tinky.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 7, 2006

Love your passion and sweetness. Though the poem is suffused
with sadness, beauty and passion WILL have their way. Your
talent WILL not let them play second fiddle[-x?;)} Pain
is more than balanced by your obvious capacity for love.
For luxuriating, tears and all, in the boundlessness of the heavens
through a long, softly reflecting night. Bless you!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

He's a star?

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Emotions bleeding out of a poetic love poem onto the page and letting us all see the beauty of your heart as it waits in hope for consummation! I'm moved to tears with this one Sis!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Right from your heart Tinky-Doll. Powerful emotionally filled poem.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

We are mortal ... but we dream as immortals. And you are one of the best Tinks.

Your friend ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Lovers always seek thet lover's moon for their solace. I want you to achieve this goal and go get him then move to where he is. You deserve happiness.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Tinka

A wonderful and heartfelt collaboration by you and Micky..
Kudos to both of you

Love and Harmony

Peter

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Lotsa LOVE in that thar heart, yipperdoo! Rocky

Reviewed by Elizabeth Brunson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2006

Such wisdom wrapped up here, lol...