Comma’ Sutra (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on December 18, 2007

Very sensuous and romantic! Excellent writing!

Reviewed by HB Clayton

Reviewed on September 28, 2007

I will love this one over and over. - HB

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on September 12, 2007

This is most definitely a keeper Tinks...Super write and oh so clever as well.
Love,
Tay

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 26, 2007

Nice exchange, again and again.

Ron

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on August 26, 2007

Hot Hot Hot

Walt

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

"Delight with the feeling, Like sweet summer rain" your words creating magical terrain.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

OOOO Miss Tinka! You needs to teach a course on pleasurin! I get tired of hollarin instructions as an uninformed male struggles along!
LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

I think I'm going to share this one with my hubby!

Hot, hot, hot!

~Sharon

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

WOW!

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Oh Wow, turning up the heat I see

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Beautiful and hot write

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

So moving and flowing with such inner passion. Such a delightfully written piece! Really enjoyed.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

A sensual and romantic write...penned with perfection!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Rey C (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

hot write Tinka... Rey

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

Hot and sensual just the way it should be...

Fee

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

Beautiful writing Tinka...very hot in your den...Hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

T&L This is summa hot sutra goin on, you must have 3rd degree burns after this one;-)Fantastic poem!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

Remind me to give you a call next winter when my butt freezes, I will need that kind of fire around me.
Great romantic and erotic poema if may I say.
Georg

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

Wow the flame of passion is hot
We must call the fire department
Wow my friend you have expressed you
Sensuality in this stunning poetic thoughts beautifully!!!
Outstanding piece!!
Love peace and hugsss to you....Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

Simply beautiful writing, Tinka; what more can I say?? Great job; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Off the den for a little while; membership ran out, but will be back in a few weeks or so. That is a promise! I can review or send messages, just not post stories until I am back up and running on the Den. I already miss writing! LOL

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

Very hot Tinka, can feel the heat, great poem! Holly

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

A lovely romantic write Tinka
Peace & Love

William

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

My, my and we are in the heat of August. Very sensual indeed. Victor

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 23, 2007

A beautiful, sensual write, Tinka.