Evening Ladies (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Evening Ladies
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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(Fiction) They dress uniquely They look so invitingly divine Their scent Intoxicate my senses Those charming ladies Of the night. I love When they take you home Sensuously kiss you And hum you a song. Excuse me sweetie pie She’ll say Making her temporary escape Teasingly she walks away. I’m getting into something More comfortable Make yourself at home Please stay. Upon her return Your jaw drops to the floor For the magnificent Heavenliness Standing before you wearing Black high heel stilettos A thong to match her sexy gear Huge creamy succulent soft breast Exposed Long shapely legs Running from the ground To her butt Leaving you speechless Until you feel the cracking lash From the black snake whip Adorning her hand. I love those lovely lonely ladies Of the night Only within my mind I lust As I admire them From afar. Some are so lovely Natural is their beautification Innocent looking is their game Hair up on a bunt Looking at the world Through Rose color glasses Acting shy and coy Unlike their vicious Pimp “Sweet Ride Leroy” By: William Bonilla D’Artagnan 09/01/08 Evening Ladies

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on September 7, 2008

Just read Amber's newest piece...now yours! A double Holy Cow! Sensuous writng, Bill!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 6, 2008

Women are indeed lovely, William. A very fine tribute to them you have penned here. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Valerie Roeske

Wow, quite the read here, everything seen in the nightlight streets, fabulous, Take care Valerie

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

This was so delightful! I enjoyed every naughty minute! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William this is one hot poem, now this is a side of you I have not experienced. UMMMM, I am going to start that collaboration. With care of the aged hot man!
Where in the world did you come up with this one, that mind of yours is just incredibly busy.
Love it, love it, and love it again.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" (black stilettos and a lacy thong ummmm)

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on September 5, 2008

Wow, William, you naughty man! This sure is sexy and hot! You certainly do have a wild and vivid imagination. Wonderful!

Hugs~~~Dee

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Wow! William, this poem is a beauty!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Morning Star

Woooow I love it but I'm speechless
I heard about this ladies Be very careful William
Especially if there wearing stilettos and a snake whip
I truly love how you expressed your thoughts
Even do is fiction I LOVE IT!!!!
Peace Love and Light.....Morning Star

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

I shoulda read it once the sun was down...
Great sizzle, man!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Well, well, well...is D'Artagnan venturing out in the evenings? This is seduction written with that talented pen of yours Bill...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

,,,,, too bad this is fiction,,,, Just kiddin' :) Great write once again William!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

WOUCH. Had to laugh at Georg's comment. Glad I'm not a guy.

And black high heel stilletos would be the death of me. Weak ankles, you know. LOL

You do know how to tell the tale. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

"...black high heel stilettos..." if you don't give proper love to one of those ladies...you know where it would hurt!

Georg

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

I Love it! Very sensual and erotic at the same time, your imagination is fascinating!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

GREAT writing, William; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Wow ... this is wonderful writing, William -- seductive without being graphic, it works every time. Excellent.
Hugs,
CJ