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The Stage Is Set
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The Stage Is Set I am waiting for you My most beautiful divines I am setting the stage The tub I’ve Prepared Filled with water hot enough To relax you into a haven Of ecstasy Into a dream within a dream I’ll be there with you. Rose petals I’ll gently place in the water I watch them float Like little boats. The moment of truth is approaching Soon you’ll be in my embrace Scented oils I will introduce We'll bathe our senses As I stir the water I inhale the passionate aroma Of expectation. The lights are dimmed The tub is surrounded with Lit candles Champagne is chilling to the side Empty crystal cups await their contents Patiently. My heart is beating erratically Time is dragging, taking too long The beat of my heart Echoes within the chambers Of my head. All is prepared The tub, the scent, the champagne, My passion, The stage has been set Now I wait With anticipation. By: William Bonilla “D’Artagnan” 11/07/08

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on December 15, 2008

Ah, what a write, made my heart skip with anticipation.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2008

Dear William,
Keep pouring out the romance..as it seems to be a dying art. Do not be surprised if the ladies show up at your door with their towels!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by John Leko

...romantic words of beauty...set in a beautiful way.
great write William...
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Wow sounds like the passion of the night is just beginning at your place William...enjoy.

fee

Reviewed by Linda Law

Very passionate piece. Writing done with your exquisite touch. hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

So off comes the mask and cap, D'Artagnan...and the mood is set for
a soft and lush romantic evening.
Fabulous writing, Bill
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

You romantic YOU!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Your passion overflows, D'Artagnan!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

....and let the show begin.... sigh...just beautiful William!
hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Brother William, I hope she arrived before the water got cold, as you know, everything shrinks at low temperature, rose's petals too.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Beautiful......especially your last three lines!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

VERY BEAUTIFUL, ROMANTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Romantic and sensual write William and I loved the warm cozy feeling reading it. Wonderful write. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by George Carroll

A very romantic poem filled with love and thoughts of fulfillment.

Reviewed by Dalton James (Reader)

Like your style, Bro! I have taken some notes. DJ

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on December 13, 2008

OOOOOO So Yummy, Poetry Man! You truly know how to set a woman on fire and then take her higher! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Nothing like the feelings aroused by anticipation,
almost better than what's to come... hot stuff William!;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Whew, William, I'll be there with bells on! Whomever the lucky recipient is ... WOW. Nights of passion lay ahead! Well done, my (((friend))).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

"The beat of my heart Echoes within the chambers Of my head." my favorite line. This is beautiful, who ever this stage is set for, is a very lucky person, to have such a romantic waiting. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Bill,

Sounds so beautiful and relaxing. Very sensuous.

Mary

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Hello William,

Exquisite and magical. I have to tell you that when "my heart is beating erratically" it is a sign of heart ailment(LOL) and old age.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William, You have done it again, I need to respond to this poem, we should have a beautiful collaboration!
So when are you coming to Connecticut?
Much love, light and peace,
Amber "V"