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A Goddess Of Gold
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You are and always will be The only true Goddess That dwells within me Residing eternally In a broken heart that’s never mended Was Discarded recklessly By one Once in love. *~~ Our love was once as pure As they say The driven snow, You Loved me I loved you more For I am The one in deep pain Hurting like a forest Soaked in acid rain. ~~* I see your smile Still brightens true love’s Way Within sapphire eyes I can see My reflection You possess deep in your soul As I possess your. *~~ I crave to hear those soft Whispers Of I love you I’ve heard not in years. ~~* Silence deafens me As I listen To an empty phone Where no one On the other side whispers Anymore. *~~ By: William Bonilla D'Artagnan 09/18/07**

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 18, 2009

I know these feelings well, William. Powerful and compelling are your verses. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by C. Stone

Reviewed on July 15, 2009

A song filled with emotions and longing. A beautiful write!

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

POETRY...LOVELY POETRY. NESTLED IN A FRAMEWORK OF A PERFECT STYLE ARE PHRASES THAT DRAW A PICTURE OF ONE BEMOANING A LOST LOVE. DONE WITH VIVID IMAGES AND RHYME, THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING, BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

This is excellent,great work,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

I like the forest simile, William. So sad this one is. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

A sad poem, William Ive been there Hugs,Johanna

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

My heart is saddened to know of a love withering within the empty longing of an embrace to fufill the endearing dreams still living inside the broken heart of love's soul
Much Love & Inspirations William
Vickie

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 26, 2009

nice romantic verse William, hope the phone rings for you, of course just joking, cheers or ears fpo

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2009

An exceptional poem William, Holly

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 23, 2009

this is truly melting, William. Such a painful scenario you paint here, such tender desperation and despair in the voice. Hopefully the Goddess will turn to liquid fire on receipt of your prayers at her altar! What pure joy to be so much loved. :)) xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

You write with such sadness and longing in this beautiful poem, William...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

:( How sad! I hope your Goddess realizes how much you love her :)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

so sad and full of loss-well expressed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

So very sad, D'Artagnan.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 21, 2009

..sadness, yet such deep compassion for that Golden Goddess.