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The Illusion
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Thank goodness this is a poem from my attic of verse. I almost lost my way but life has a way of keeping the rhythms together that best suit us. My heart rejoices at that decision.


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In the diminished power of illusion
As tears lasso a dream
Facets fade as the shade draws
Upon embroidered gloss she screams
In quiet sobs she remorses
What was then, is now... and gone
She holds the smile he gave her
Then pain strikes to her bones
Regret of what had happened
In this crossroad of pure pain
When he came out of nowhere
Then for a time echoed her name
It just wasn't meant to happen
As farrowed dreams paint fault
They bow to her fast sorrow
As her tears turn into salt
This world can be so beautiful
As dawn begins each day
But love can paint a canvas
Turn sunshine into grays
They take another pathway
Never knowing what is gone
To live a life without true love
Then go their way alone.

~ Penned by Susan K. Rowse~
copyright 2004



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 Reviews of "The Illusion"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
True love sure can be an Illusion, can't it?

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Susan,
Excellent poetry. Love sure does have its ups and downs. The dreams are more pronounced through that graphic. Sad and beautiful write.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
OUCH, kinda lovelorn poem, that is very poignant..

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Wonderful write Susan. As always I admire your poetry.

Jack

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Susan, tomorrow's another day and tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow; soon this would be come a memory, any you would wonder why so much pain. As we go through life, we find more pain and failure
to eaual or last one. A greater love and a greater love, if even in our dreams. This poem is amazing just like you: to suffer so and be able to write about it so well is a great gift. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
A poem of heart-searing poignancy.
You are a talented writer, my dear.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
OMG this is as painful as it gets Susan....and believe me I know this sooo well sis....tears!!

This made my cry...really...this ripped my heart out!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
I read it's sorrow of losing someone that had helped you feel the beauty of being loved and the sadness when it no longer did.

The poem flows easily, beautiful rhymes.


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