This poem is dedicated to Johnny Mercer, Otis Redding, Ray Charles, Gladys Knight and all my fellow Georgians who have given a lift to our hearts through their tunes and a song to drink to when the mood changes.
Susan*
sitting here on a dreary day
listening to the old tunes sway
piano tunes and nostalgic songs
it’s just the place where I belong
“no no…they can’t take that away ”
it’s a favorite for me….even today
“don’t let the blues make you bad”
it’s a reminder of days when I lived sad
“don’t let temptation surround you”
advice that I heeded a bunch
“cry me a river” was one of those tunes
that brought me to tears over lunch
“i’ll be seeing you…
in everything that’s light and gay”
this is a song that gives me focus
in dreams… come what may…
“these foolish things…
remind me of you”…
comes on a cloud
colored in hues
of blues and grays and fluid tears
from days gone cold in forlorn years
then best of all and from the heart
comes “Moon River”
with home and a warming hearth
"Sitting on the Dock of the Bay"
all are watery songs....visuals still gray
but when I sneak on out the gloom
i smell the effervescence of a haunting tune
with aromas of love that abounds this day
the spirit of song takes me away
“I’m taking you home…”
these are the words that are comfort and strong
belonging is where we all wish to be
it’s where I ‘m secure
with heart in a soul… born spirit free
“this love is nothing like I’ve ever known"
i'm alive in a heart and finally at home
on a tired and lack-a-daysical day…
music is my savior from days gone gray.
The creativity in the hearts, minds and souls of those who lent their lyrics to song is alive and well in you and your pen. Without the art of writing and song this world would be a lesser place. They soothe us in time of turmoil and shelter us from the bad in ourselves and the world. You express yourself so well your poems have a life of their own. To me they are immortal. meaningful write.
It's those phrases, those hooks, that you can't get out of your mind, like "Your once, twice, three times a lady, and I loovvveee you!"
Ron
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2006
All I can say is in the old words, I guess this is on my mind...
Georgia, Georgia, the whole day through
Just an old sweet song keeps Georgia on my mind.
Georgia, Georgia, a song of you
Comes as sweet and clear as moonlight through the pines
Very very cool write!
Brings back memories..........
put this on a refrigerator magnet
this love is nothing like I’ve ever known"
i'm alive in a heart and finally at home
on a tired and lack-a-daysical day…
music is my savior from days gone gray
loved it!! lol
pax A
Reviewed by Victor Dean (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2006
There is nothing like good old country music, the Ray Price and Faron Young kind and there is nothing like rock and roll, Elvis, The Doors, Janis, Iron Butterfly and Led Zeppelin kind.
I'm staggered... by the wealth of art and creativity which seems to be mined from rich seams in your part of the world, Susan. It is endless - and you are part of this abundant river that continues to flow, and others at the Den with you. What a privilege to be an artistic and creative part of this lush musical and poetical vineyard. I could drink of your vintage all day long, every day of my life! And this is a fresh and delightful tribute. TY Kate xx
What perfect idea to change the mood of the day. Am immediately changing from news to the oldies
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2006
I hear you, I have The Mills Brothers in my cars' tapedeack No, I don't have a CD player in the car. They are not from Georgia, don't think, but still sound pretty good.
It is amazing that somthing that is so much a part of our lives from the cradle to the grave is taken for granted. So many memories are associated with songs and music and where would we be without those first tender waltz's that for most of us were the first contact with the opposite sex. You really nailed this one down Susan. Wonderful as always.
Pierre.
Ron
Georgia, Georgia, the whole day through
Just an old sweet song keeps Georgia on my mind.
Georgia, Georgia, a song of you
Comes as sweet and clear as moonlight through the pines
Brings back memories..........
put this on a refrigerator magnet
this love is nothing like I’ve ever known"
i'm alive in a heart and finally at home
on a tired and lack-a-daysical day…
music is my savior from days gone gray
loved it!! lol
pax A
Yes, for me, those old tunes do have a lot of magic, and restorative, power in them.
Thanks
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Love Tinka
A trip down memory lane, that is steeped in nostalgia and joy..
" Georgia..Oh Georgia...No Peace can I find...
Just an old sweet song...Keeps Georgia on my Mind "...
Peter
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