Our playground of love plays for days and days
Until heat from the sun justifies this play
For to gather the juices of love in this form
Is to worship the man that created this storm
exceptionally creative and well versed, Susan ... such a playground must be a pleasure to romp in ...
Reviewed by jerry gray (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2006
Some of your writing is lovely. Unfortunately, this one is rather juvenile. Your production volume is overwhelming. I wonder what would happen if you spent a few days on a poem instead of a few hours. Perhaps you prefer to depend on visits from your muse.
You really do have talent but you don't seem to have a penchant for the difficult work of editing and revision.
Please don't take offense. This is simply my plea.
Your creativity is boundless Susan. Love the poem and pic! Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2006
Yep. Three cheers for your fantastic, insightful and wonderful take on all things pertaining to love . . . You are good . . . I know I've said that before, but it bears repeating from time to time.
You are such a clever one....Love the way you play with words, Suzan...
Work and play took me away...to a place where my internet time was all work and no play....no poetry either until tonight! Hooray! Nice to have been missed GF...
xo Taylor
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You really do have talent but you don't seem to have a penchant for the difficult work of editing and revision.
Please don't take offense. This is simply my plea.
Love Tinka
Fee
A word weaver..
Susan
Work and play took me away...to a place where my internet time was all work and no play....no poetry either until tonight! Hooray! Nice to have been missed GF...
xo Taylor