Endless Dawn (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 23, 2006

The imagery and depth of perception is omnious. Morning, sunset, days renewed are all symbolic of the many journeys life has to offer. Thank you, DL Mullan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 19, 2006

Dawn as seen in the Arctic when endless night is over.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 15, 2006

Our hearts will regain what beat it remembers
As dawn brings new drama to dying old embers
And daylight reminds us that living is pain
Until nighttime commits us to travel again.

luv those lines, Susan ...

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 14, 2006

Thanks for re-posting this gem

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

"And daytime reminds us that living is pain and nighttime commits us to travel again" So true, yet every new day we awaken a little less
of who we were and a little more of who we will be. Such a great write. Pierre.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

We must live in a mixture of reality and illusions. It is important to distinguish between them. Very inspirational poem. Victor

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Reads like an old wine, on a magical day..

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

excellent lines--this is 1 of my favorites--cheers and thanks a million

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

And daylight reminds us that living is pain
Until nighttime commits us to travel again.

Beautiful write that just travels on in the heart, mind and soul with such lyricism and compulsion. Images of tumbleweed spin through my imagination. Light and gossamer and yet not without the added weight of the wisdom of experience and understanding. Bless you in your move and may it be a most settling experience! :)) LOL K xx

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Another excellent piece Susan. You display your talents well.
Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Glorious as you so often qre with your imagery, and the pic to match!
How I ache for you sis with the move. I've been praying it all goes well. I'm close to having order and knowing where everything is, then I can hang pictures;-) Hope you'll soon be saying the same.;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Sweet is the arrival of each new day when the old one seemed hopeless. This is a classic write sweet Susan with a sincere feeling of intensity that will never wear out.

fEe

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Enjoyed this...enjoy the moving sis!!

I would love to move..those are the times you clean up nice!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Mooving? You didn't clear that with me! Oh, well, hope you move is without problems. The poem? You wrote it, didn't you? That means I liked it. You DO have the knack most of us only wish for.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

I can see why this is one of your favorites, it's now one of mine.Love,
George

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 13, 2006

Glad you reposted this, Susan; it's very good, as is that picture.