déjà visité ("already visited") and the second déjà vecu ("already experienced or lived through").
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"The eyes are not responsible when the mind does the seeing." -Publilius Syrus
I hear him out there somewhere, whoever he may be
I'm full each time I think of him and he's everything to me
Each time we are together his mystery compounds love
The love grows unimaginable...with strength no one can covet
It takes a common bond here, two spirits of one soul
Inside where there are no laws and where
the passion's hold
This bounty for two lovers who love unselfishly
Who sway to dance a love waltz with spirits flying free
As his rhythm starts caressing me I sway with every turn
He licks away my mindset and eases in a burn
This fire he starts so gently then slides right on inside
We hold each other tenderly then glide, hold fast and ride
I open to his pulse rate and feel his iron embrace
Unfold my passion roses...with raw and fluid grace
He licks my frisky moments as I shift my lips to taste
I slide along his body with my hair all in his face
Then to his neck I wander to kiss my way on down
Nibble at his chest hairs and slide out of my gown
His hands embrace my nipples, he begs for a small taste
We know that this is futile as I nibble to his waste
I want him here inside me, much more than words can say
Just as the flesh is pleading, we give into love's sway
I move and he moves with me , my lips gripping each moan
His passion has more power as my need grips down upon
This mighty man of passion, with punchuated shoves
This anvil of hearts beating ,with nourishing pure love
This is one sure love happening, this one unlike all others
With heady mind flow breathing and rolling beneath covers
Each kiss is full and deeper as pounding love storms in
It's ravished sheets in fingers gripped, just as the juices spend
Themselves with groans from somewhere, in tongues that no one knows
It comes to spirits deep in love as worlds inside explode
Amazing love of a lifetime,
Timeless love in bloom
Knowing free-style passions will energize this room
There are no words of art here, no wisdom of decree
It's the simple love of a lifetime
In spirit, him and me.
I think Kate said it for me,Susan, but rather than look away, I just wanted to be her for as long as I could read...my imagine needed no coaxing, it was all right there for me until I could make such poetry.
I'm a sweatin'...over a once in a lifetime love.
You are the best, Susan!
Love,
Taylor
What an amazing PS quote to couch this in, Susan. And, as for the amazing, totally suffocating-with-combustion tour de force that follows... I am an absolute wringing heap. Totally, TOTALLY mouth-watering, heartpounding, throat-bulging DIVINE!! In fact, don't know about deja vu, but I felt so voyeur I had to look away..
There are no words of art here, no wisdom of decree
It's the simple love of a lifetime
In spirit, him and me.
What more is there to say? Total unification. One essence.
Totally brilliant. T(otall!)Y K xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2007
Anvil of hearts, just one of many unique descriptions in this highly spiro/eros poem...
very sensuous from beginning to end good read a few mechanical errors you might correct later. thanks for sharing
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
You've got it girl! All that passion is fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!Love Holly
Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
Now that is HOT!!! (smile) Wordplay and rhythmically urgent pulse. Bringing your femininity and your lioness out. And with a spiritual side. You love as few others, Susan, and that you can share it so brilliantly in rhyme is truly a blessing. Thank you...
simon
Nothing like having a little passion mixed in with true love.
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
Oh my! A very erotic,sensual,passionate write.Still sweating,
Powerful between the sheet performance.Well done,
I was breathless with this poem.
Nicely done,
Michael
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I'm a sweatin'...over a once in a lifetime love.
You are the best, Susan!
Love,
Taylor
Ron
Love,
CJ
There are no words of art here, no wisdom of decree
It's the simple love of a lifetime
In spirit, him and me.
What more is there to say? Total unification. One essence.
Totally brilliant. T(otall!)Y K xx
Regis
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
~Butch
simon
Powerful between the sheet performance.Well done,
I was breathless with this poem.
Nicely done,
Michael