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Don't Make a Sound...
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Shhhhhh...don't make a sound!


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In my mind, where treasures are private
I find you there exploring the space
Orating the moon and stars
Seeking my cheek with fingers that trace
Innocent beating so quiet, rebounds
Caressing my hair as your fingers embrace
Don't make a sound...don't make a sound

The heart that is filling
The power that grips
Embracing the evening
Mine dares to skip
Innocent beating in hushed...rebounds
Don't make a sound, don't make a sound.

Did you feel me tremble
As eager words slipped
When slowly we strolled
When hips were to hips
Embraced by a chance in the cold night air
Snuggle me closer and please dare to dare.

I'll sit at your feet and kiss every word
Embrace your need with curve upon curve
Succumb to your wishes
As our moans rebound
Then don't make a sound,
Please, don't make a sound.

Tell me a story about the moon
Take me to Venus while I swoon
Let's ride the comets and chase our own space
Brush away phosphorous from my face
Swing on a dare as Novas rebound
Shhhhh, don't make a sound
Don't make a sound!

Copyright 2007 Susan Kathryn de Vegter

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 Reviews of "Don't Make a Sound..."
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Like a wordless embrace... Is that you or Paris Hilton hiding in the swirle of revealing art?

Ron

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Well, Hush my mouth!!

Walt

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
An incredible write
One of your best
This One I will keep
Thanks for sharing
Peace be with you

Love
William

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
...the lure of love...in the quiet of your word...perhaps hidden just for two.
well done...
John

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
nice.....


very nice.....




enjoyed...Art Sun...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
ahhhhhhhhhh sis this is perfection shhhhhhh I love it!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Excellent yet again!!

lvoe Tinka

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
A very powerful piece romancing the words

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Oh ... love that image Belle! And you captured this moment with sensual elegance. Like soft susurrations of Cythereas honey. Blessings dear Poetess ...
Richard

Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
I love this poem. I can almost hear you whispering those words.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
A truly marvelous Hush upon this page!

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
You've used up all the good words... leaving me to say, sincerely and profoundly... You do take me away in this... and soundlesslly!!
- Bill

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
The profoundity (word?) of "Shhhhh, don't make a sound" is eteched in the readers psyche as he/she/they read this graceful poetry. As we read your words it is as though we are . . . Shhhhh . . . Somehow getting away with something delightfully sinful and . . . Shall I say it again? Profound . . . You NEVER quit mesmerizing me with your total feel for the human spirit . . . No one writes love poems as you do, Susan . . .

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
What A scenario of beauty on earth - Delicately Directed from higher ground {so beautiful} -All love & goodness * Ted

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
You really have written a beautiful love dance in the stars with your elegant lines. It is a tapestry of the finest silken threads brushed with the elixir of Aphrodites tincture.

Reviewed on September 15, 2007
*words almost too loud* Beautiful, Susan; beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
What can I say? This is an incredible story of love and its manifestation.

Kathy

Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Pretty write and graphic, Susan; very nice! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
the magic of a moment endures when it is left to the silent roar of its experience and embrace ... luv the voicing and sentiment in this poem, Susan ...


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