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Counterfeit Words
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Friends are valuable. They give one treasures full of honesty, dedication and spirit. The love is never selfish in a true friendship and , therefore it grows. When deceit and betrayal rear it's head then friendships are seen in a true r light for the dedication that goes through this storm and comes out stronger. Friends are degrees of a persons facets in life. Betrayal trespasses over an oath of fellowship and can become the test for truth. Sometimes we just need to empty the bin even though it can be hard we learn our lessons toward life and this delemma. ***Graphic : A Shaman's Tears SKR*

```````````````````````````````````` Counterfeit Words Counterfeit words ... spoken to buy Love of a woman with friendship to ply All her doors open and time on his side Verbage of poetry...lined with thick hide A wolf in sheep's clothing waiting to pounce... Grazing so quietly with a grasshoppers bounce Then gives this fair warning to keep the door closed... Lest hearts that are weeping should weep even more Forewarned is better than broken up souls For now sit and ponder and close all your pores Take in the flag of truce that once hung Give up the search...for now...call it done! � 2003 susan K. Rowse Susan welcomes your comments! Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewed by swampfox

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

you are a Princess and I will be the knight come to your rescue. Point me in the correct direction. No one harms a princess.
GS

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

wonderful Susan!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Susan, this sounds like your smarting from someone's trespass, if that's true, I am sorry and I hope they taste ashes in their mouth for days. Wonderfully written, and great wisdom.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

very deep and thoughtfully provoking awesome job on this fantastic poem

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Great writing!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Good Morning Susan,
Yes we should be weary of ones words. But we have to listen. No?
Great Write again, susan.

ty

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Dear Susan...This is outstanding write from you my friend...simply great write here...thanks a lot...cheers..love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Susan, very well done. You always put so very much feeling in your poetry.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Good one Susan!.....May the guilty one rise and down on your knees.....

Pray!.....My friends......Pray!.....May the Lord forgive your sins!

Amen