Trying to find a superlative...sublimely beautiful..;-)
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
How beautiful Susan and I can see he loves it. I love what is happening here. I posted my comment and his answer to me at your site. Ok? May the stars gather in your eyes, until he can see them all shining only for him. Love to you both.
This makes me joyful. bill
I'd like to tell you this is a beautiful poem! Very nice Susan!
Jack
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
". . . and seal it with my sighs." That says it all and you know how to always say it.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Very beautiful......that last line is perfect.....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Susan dear susan...first of all...oh so touching...such an exceptional write..and I dont know of another poet who keeps the meter so perfect as you..an art in itself...lovely work..Floria
A gripping crime thriller for fans of fast twists, dark secrets, and adrenaline-fueled suspense
A mobster with a broken memory---A stolen fortune hidden for 15 years.
Mack Peters is about to play A Risky Game—and the next move could get him killed.
This makes me joyful. bill
Eyes Never Deceive!
TRASK
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Jack
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