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The Hose on My Nose
by Linda A Murray → (All Poetry by Linda A Murray)
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This thing I wear on my face at night.
Isn't a very beautiful sight.
Darth Vader look was never the best.
But to live I must do it I guess.
This thing I wear on my nose.
Is attached to a very long hose.
This hose that is attached to my nose.
Is inserted in a box for a hose.
The noise that it makes is swashy, swishy.
To be ever so quite is what I wishy.
It must go with me everywhere I goes.
This thing I wear on my nose.
This thing that I must wear at night.
Keeps me alive for another days fight.
I love life and to be alive.
That is all that I strive.
So I will wear the Darth Vader look.
Even though it is not sexy.
Oh, maybe there is a Mister Darth Vader.
And maybe we could get perplexy.
 


 

Sleep Apnea a term used for people that stop breathing at night while they sleep. Like sids in babies. And this is a cutie poem to make up for the unbearable hose on the nose thing called a cpap machine.--LOL
 
 
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "The Hose on My Nose"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
I am awed by the courage and dignity of hope expressed in these words of your creation. Thank you for this offering. Love, peace and strength, Regis.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
I agree with ~E~
You have to be a sweet soul...

Reviewed on May 16, 2003
Wow..this was an excellent poem about something not so good, love your attitude,

Reindeer

Reviewed on May 16, 2003
(((HUGS))) we does what we gotta does, to stay alive...thank God you've been given the opportunity to live with sleep apnea...LOL at elizabeth's "mrs. darth vadar"...don't think i could wear that mask...claustrophobic GETTHISTHING*OFF*ME! LOL you've more courage than me...well done, well written, humorous poem...don't ever give up--(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2003
Linda this is great and so wonderfully done! I work in a Nursing Home and we have a gentleman living there LTC who is not elderly persay but he does have this problem and is on a bipap whenever he lays or even sits on his bed just in case he sleeps...I do believe this will provide him some inspiration and humor which both of which he needs so I hope you do not mind but I am going to print this one out for him! So thank you from Mr. Carey!
~Nikki~

Reviewed on May 16, 2003
cute write about a not so cute situation. glad you have a good attitude about it! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 16, 2003
Linda, love the poem. Your attitude is awesome.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Like you said, "cute write."

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Mrs. Darth Vader ??
You have a good attitude. We do what we must. Attitude is everything. Make it the best you can. Cute poem.


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