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Caterpillar
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Will it ever make it to be a butterfly?


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They sat and watched the caterpillar
slowly make it across the floor,
they wondered if it would ever
make it out the door.
In came a large pair of shoes,
badly influenced by alcohol booze.


They figured the caterpillar
needed a hand,
if it was ever going to grow wings
and fly off the land.
Back some years,
their love suffered the same fears.
For quite awhile they wondered,
as their love slowly blundered.


They both walked in different shoes,
and indulged in the alcohol booze.
Through God's help they gave it up,
now their love is no longer corrupt.
For years they have been soaring,
and their love is still out pouring.


Two weeks later,
lovingly sitting on a bench,
a beautiful butterfly
flew within an inch.


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 Reviews of "Caterpillar"
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
What an inspiration in these beautiful lines you penned ONEPOEt!
I feel such a tender soul here!
Wonderfully done Grady!
WArmest HuGs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
Stay Happy and Healthy!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
Beautiful uplifting write....thanks for sharing!!

For a moment i was waiting for those boots to splat the caterpillar...!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
lovely and inspiring-good job

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
Awe One, this write is so full of beauty and soul! Love it! Gentle, wise, profound, with a beautiful story that unfolds as graceful as the butterfly itself! My favorite thus far! Still have a smile on my face!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
They made it!! Love those happy endings. Great write.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
Love is both blind and forgiving, but sometimes it comes wearing lumberjack boots.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
And the moral to this tale is.......Trust in God when you seek assistance to man made conflict.....Good write.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
awe..i love happy endings

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
Oh my,I love butterflies...well done sweet sweet man...Hugssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
Well maybee he was tired

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
Beautiful! I always liked that poem about a butterfly:
I've watch you now... a full half hour
self poised upon that yellow flower
and little butterfly indeed...
I know not if you sleep or feed.
How motionless... not frozen seas
more motionless and then what joy awaits you
once the breeze has found you out and calls you home again.
(((I don't remember who wrote that but I know it by heart.)))
God Bless,
Lew


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