Some friends like too play games, but they really mean no harm, it's only an attention alarm.
You play the game well, but it's a game backed by hell. You slither in like a mouse, but you're a lion in the house. I recognized your play, but you won't mess up my day.
My day has already been screwed, so you're late with what you brewed. I love cat and mouse, but I'm not a louse. Your move on the board, is a meow to the lion that roared.
I'm no big mean cat, I just know how to cut out the fat. You're not fat trying to hide, so I'll go on your ride. After you're done, that is if you finish, we can still have fun. I'll be right here, and I'm not going to run.
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Reviews of "Cat & Mouse"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 25, 2007
I think this is the best of all your poems that I have read so far. Nice rhythm and good rhyme. Outstanding imagery. Consistent tone and mood throughout. Great theme. I enjoyed the contrasts you set up in the beginning stanzas the most. Keep up the great work! I love it.
I pictured you a big mean cat here...roaring like a lion, not taking anyone's dookie! LOL! ...but I'm not sure if it has a touch of cunningness, as in sly...watch your back...or plain softness for his fellow man...your alright attitude, to it? Hmmm? Curiosity...HA!
Better run! LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~(still laughing...
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Sometimes it is fun to watch them play out their games once you know their plan. Good thoughts. Lady J
This is a Hypertext Book Release of the F. Scott Fitzgerald classic This Side of Paradise on Black April 23, 2016 which is William Shakespeare,s 400th birthday.
Blessings,
Joyce B.
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Better run! LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~(still laughing...
Lions?....too hairy.
Mouses? they said they scare elephants silly.
Georg