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Love Won't Work
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Love has to be forced into action, to simply get some satisfaction.


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Love is lazy
it will drive you crazy
Love just sits
no wonder so many
give it the quits
Over my life time it
has given me the chits

Starting with dad
love he never had
Finishing up with my wife
the love of my life
I really don't want to discuss
the misery and strife
As far as the other suckers
they have been
mother phuckers

Love won't work
when you dealing with a jerk
Love won't work
unless it's an inner perk
When we're not at our best
love will lay down and rest
There will be a contest
One to survive
the devil that arrive

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 Reviews of "Love Won't Work"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 5, 2009
well said!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 5, 2009
yes there is so much to write about love
whether it be good or rad
happy or sad
One writes from the heart
Peace Brother Grady

William

Reviewed on June 5, 2009
Powerful writing, Gem; well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 5, 2009
Gem, it seems to me that love is too complicated to analyze.
It either is or it ain't. In my vast (sic) experience, I've
found that love is its own feed back. -gene.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on June 5, 2009
My dear GEM. a succinct statement!

Love is such a complex subject...short term passionate to long term caring...your poem brought Tina Turner to mind (What's love got to do with it) although that wasn't on your mind entirely...I wonder, can one live more peacefully without love? that wouldn't work either, would it?

Your stark words make one think!

thanks and hugs
Gina


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