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Take A Way
by Erica Ivory → (All Poetry by Erica Ivory)
  
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Written as a song...


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Take Away
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Try to take away
the things you've said to hurt me..
That's up to you..
Try to take away the painful times
and the hell you put me through..

You don't admit it..
I don't care..
Cause it's been so long ago...
Just don't think you can make me forget ..
Cause it's burned down in my soul..
You cannot heal the pain of being alone
cause it's burned down in my soul.

I tried for many years you know..
To be the lover
That you want..
But you just turned your back on me
and I was soon forgot..
So Hurt me..
Hate me ..
Leave me..
Ohh How you love to play that game..
I only wanted to love you baby..
but you can hurt me just the same..

So go on..
Try to take away the things
you've said to hurt me..
That's up to you..
Try to take away the painful times
and the hell you put me through
Don't admit it
I don't care..
Cause it's been so long ago.
Just don't think you can cure this pain ..
Cause it's burned down in my soul..

No, I will never love like this again..
Cause your burned down in my soul


Erica Ivory











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 Reviews of "Take A Way"
Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
i love it, erica...and some sonds are poetry, and with your gift and honesty...well, for me, it worked...Love it, sadly all too true,yes!
((You!))

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
just don't take away you expressionist poems ;)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
raw expression !!!

Reviewed on April 17, 2003
How deeply this one cut into my heart this morning, how well I understand,

Excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
4-16-03

Just Keep On Burning Those Poems . Authorsden!

TRASK

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
i dunno, i like it as a poem...!!!

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
I wish love would take away the pain.
I wish love would win the day.
Such heartfelt pain.
Very well written.
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
excellent, very expressive, full of hurt...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Erica,
Oh `tears...
Peggy

Reviewed on April 16, 2003
pure raw expression Erica. nice

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Bravo!!!
Great one...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
very stong!
show this to HIM!!!!!


Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Good country western...I like it.


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