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Be, To Be Me
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Step into my shoes
for just one moment
and look through my eyes.

Tell me what you see.

Tell me about my hurt
from your perspective
of being me.
Tell me what it's like
to stop being you, to be me.

 

Copyright © 2004 Sara Coslett (and my others)

 


 

Photograph of a postcard sent to me when I was recovering from surgery. At the time I saw it as a gesture of love. But I learned rather quickly not to trust gestures, as they can become weapons used to inflict pain.

 


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 Reviews of "Be, To Be Me"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Well I would proly find out that I'm a lesbien, and stand naked looking in the mirror all day...)

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
Very strong and intense write.
Nevertheless, hearing from someone you love at a time you need it most is always a sign of love, I'd say. He cared and wanted to show you. Maybe just picked the wrong thing and was not aware that it might have hurt you.
But it's the will that counts.

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Great suggestion - if we really could see and feel the world through another pair of eyes, all of us would behave in different ways. Until we can exchange ourselves, lets try to be guided by compassion and a sniff of caution. Franz

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Sara, my valued friend, this exceptional write just blasted through my soul knowing that we all have at one time or another wished for just a second that someone else could step in our shoes or we could step into theirs. I am quite sure it would resolve most issues before they ever had a chance to blow up in our faces. As usual you are able to stir the emotions of your readers and admires with your gifted quill. Thank you for sharing your timeless creations. Since I am not sure when you had your surgery, I do hope all is well my friend. Take care.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
If we truly could step into someone else's shoes, many many perspectives might change, but some would probably still be too blind to see.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Another "If you could only walk in my shoes" situations. Thing is I imagine that if he could look through yours eyes he might find more things to complain and act manly dumdum about. Better let the sleeping beast sleep. Better yet, check out the perspective through HIS eyes. Don't get angry at me, just contemplating.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Hey look at it this way, you save on consulting fees.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Sara...chin Up girl...makes one look taller...specially a shortshit like me!!

Smile Okay...I believe he still cares..but tooo bloody stubborn to admit it...little Rascal!!

Love You

Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
"They" have all the answers... until they have to walk the path of another, rather than simply comment. Nice write.


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