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A Knight in Shining 'Amour'
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I miss you already
as you spend the evening
wining and dining beneath
an unlit sky like a knight
in shining 'amour' 

© 2008 Sara Coslett

 

Photoart: “Goodbye Darkness” by it-i-laf

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "A Knight in Shining 'Amour'"
Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 2, 2008
When a final good-bye is said, one moves on, while the other is left to grieve love's passing. SC

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on August 31, 2008
Clever girl! I like both renditions. At least he's not whining and denying. --Charlie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
Great play on words. In their armour trying to amour. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
Very simple but very effective write that a heart in love would love. Well done Sara.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on August 30, 2008

Your simple and sweet statement doesn't need to be explained. Before reading your and other reviews, I accepted it as that apart feeling we get when we are with one loved, but know that person is no longer thinking of me, or is in my aura of influence. It is beautiful and ample in its original form.. - Bill


Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 29, 2008
sorry, you are both right. i should have written it as:

i miss you already
as you spend the evening
wining and dining beneath
a moonless sky like a knight
in shining amour

I could have changed 'knight' to 'night', but the play on words was already there in 'amour' versus armor, so I didn't want to get too cutesy.

I don't know if any of that would have made it more clear.

Reviewed on August 29, 2008
Hmmm. This one will make me think...is he the only light under the sky? Is he being gallent? Or a cad? Or did I miss the point completely (which is entirely possible, I'm sleepy! LOL) Thought provoking in its impact: well done, Sara.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 29, 2008
This is a challenging piece and its impact and meaning, I humbly suggest, will vary from reader to reader and that in itself makes it very worthwhile.
John


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