Muffled Candor (poem) by Patricia Gomes on AuthorsDen

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Reviewed on February 7, 2003

the naked girl on my part caught my eye(and no im not perverted)the poem was fantastic i truly enjoyed this poem

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

your silence is deafeningly real...

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

omg
you..got me.
oh...
and that last line, stopped me sooooo cold...
oh, you are so good!
OUCH! love your style/honest and here, oh god...what a piece!

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

Oh yes, honesty is dreadfully silent. That's why we have poetry to fill in the gaps. Fantastic writing and style. :)

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

How very true, Pat, How very true

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2003

I love this poem, give me honesty over flattery any day! It is less painful in the long run.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on January 13, 2003

I'd be lying if I said
I didn't like this poem.
I like it...no lie.

Reviewed by Amber Lynn (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2003

If only everyone could be as absolutely honest as you in love, then hearts wouldn't break so easily. Great Job.

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo

Reviewed on January 12, 2003

Powerful and beautiful.......thank you

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2003

I could tell you i didn't like this
but i would be lying
with that in mind i will just be dreadfully silent

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 12, 2003

Amazing, to find pleasure in the possible lie is, I guess, human nature's need for attention and affirmation...I like this, P.!

Erin
:)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on January 12, 2003

Pat,

Speechless!!! Ummm I can't pick a line or stanza in this that is my favorite, okay the ending, BANG!

Now excuse me, because I need some coffee after this one, although it gave me a jolt all on its own!

Will be coming back here and reading this one about 1000 times...at least!

Love You,
Maria
xoxoxox

Reviewed by William M. Sowman

Reviewed on January 11, 2003

I can picture the look on the face of whoever you would say this too ......
.......................................
"I would tell you it didn't hurt me
I'd be lying,
I would say I understood
I'd be lying,
I would say it doesn't matter
and wait for the teardrops to fall,
But before they touched the ground
I'd be gone; suitcase and all,
And the roar of the motor
as the car sped away
would breakd the f..king silence
once and for all." Shakesphere
or Bill Murray

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2003

You have reached down into me and I felt the things you felt and wanted in this one excellent
Art excellent.
~P
thanks
Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 11, 2003

couldn't you have been a bit more straight forward?...;-) fantastic write P. as always...

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2003

powerful

Reviewed by anne cunningham

Reviewed on January 11, 2003

honest write